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Already quite the queue :s_tongue: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1189689/windrakes-rogue/ Looking forward to when you're able to get to me.

Thank you, ch... oh, sorry, chef.:ROFLMAO:

I present you with an undercooked Windrake's Rogue, Chef Tempokai, ready for roasting. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1189689/windrakes-rogue/

Your reviews have made me laugh several times... I think I'm ready for the roast. If you get a chance: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1189689/windrakes-rogue/

I have two characters I tried to do this with. Marvin is a funny asshole type that has creative insults and a little bit of the "my way or the highway" mentality. Braun is a douchebag frat boy type (not malicious) that gets in funny situations because he's a douchebag. You don't ever feel bad...

The sneaky Jay plot works and you did a good job of painting the MC as the nerdy gamer outcast. Some things to work on: 1. There's no hook at the beginning. I would start with the phone ringing. He wakes abruptly, Jump right into the conversation, grumbles at having to do chores before gaming...

The good: It's easy to follow and there's not a bunch of world-building crammed in the first chapter. The bad: There's absolutely no hook. The first two chapters are about a lazy student who likes to nap. As soon as he falls asleep for his second nap, I'm going to take a hint and fall asleep...

Sounds like someone reported you :( My story has a slower start in regards to sexual content, but it should pick up quickly. We will see if I earn my own chat with John.

I've enjoyed most of Bruce Sentar's work. Returner's Defiance and Ard's Oath are probably my top ones.

I added to non-horror disclaimer because the synopsis sounds like their might be horror (hence, why the synopsis needed work:LOL:). My first work was a litRPG, so I added that for my current followers. I guessing you're saying those need to go?

I'm struggling to produce a synopsis I'm happy with. I've tried the conventional wisdom, but I'm reluctant to give any too many details in the synopsis due to the plot-twisty nature of the story. I didn't even want to put the protagonist's name in there. Any help is welcome, don't feel the need...

That's exactly what happened to me. I was trying to find a harem-leading non-beta MC without the plot being too dark, and couldn't find it. Decided to try it out myself. While my writing still has a ways to go (the first chapters rougher than toilet paper from the dollar store), I've enjoyed the...

How do authors find beta readers that give valuable feedback? As an amateur author, I find I can get really ignorant to the holes in my own writing. I feel like beta readers would be very useful. Do authors just get popular enough that people volunteer?

Yes, I should specify I'm working through it as an author, not a reader :blobrofl:

I'm working through this novel currently, I think it fits your describe very well. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1167413/the-deviant-dominant/