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    Another Generous Feedback Thread

    GB is gender-bender lol
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    Another Generous Feedback Thread

    My bad, king. I didn't see your edit. Do you want me to re-post the feedback in the first chap, or is it fine with you?
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    It's just me.

    I know of it being a joke, but of course I do pity non-well known and well-written stories being less popular than smut. (I despise smut) I called 'em a "king" despite both our replies already conflicting, and they called me "peasant" :blob_hmm_two:
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    Another Generous Feedback Thread

    I recommend others to read this, btw. It's great.
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    I have a new webnovels

    It looks good ATM.
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    It's just me.

    Kinky.
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    It's just me.

    Awesome. We love normalizing disrespect .... not. Definitely an kink issue you need to work on. :blob_unamused:
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    Another Generous Feedback Thread

    Here's the deal. I skim through your story, be as nice as possible with honest feedback and critique, and you sleep at night with miserable thoughts about your writing (maybe). I also have a great borderwall. 1. I will NOT read SMUT. 2. I will NOT read BL, GL, or GB. NO EXCEPTIONS (unless it...
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    It's just me.

    I don't get the internet persona thing on SHF. It's odd.
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    Seeking Feedback on Chapter 1

    Good writing. I skimmed through, and I found a problem you need to work on; > you're telling, not showing. What you need to do is show instead of tell what the characters are feeling straight up. (Basically, don't be straightforward.) Here's an extremely basic example: WRONG -- He grew angry...
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    The Greatest Fight

    Never written one before. Lol.
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    It's just me.

    I wonder why people leave. :blob_unamused: You're a smut enjoyer, I get it. Pretty low to return hatred when someone tries to be nice to you. Nice job, now we know why you're sad every time you open SHF.
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    It's just me.

    My bad king; but Scribblehub is Scribblehub. Where's the difference? :blob_unamused:
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    POV switches

    if your story includes the genre, mystery, then it might be okay. otherwise, I highly advise against needlessly using different POV unless it's introducing an Arc-long issue.
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    It's just me.

    There are a lot of new people, but the issue is.. none of them are being welcomed lol. Their writings aren't even being looked at, and SH basically only support smut stories (those things get popular quickly). You gotta greet everyone, or else there's just going to be dead accounts everywhere...
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    Perception is strange

    gravity can bend time btw
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    Ungodly Amount of Power Debuffs on a Character

    of course there's a proper plot for illness. (its a mysterious illness btw, so it's only slowly being uncovered.) and of course, we've hinted whhere his debuffs are coming from.
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    Ungodly Amount of Power Debuffs on a Character

    Funny thing is, more than half of these are included in the plan. We just need to add more.
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