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GB is gender-bender lol

My bad, king. I didn't see your edit. Do you want me to re-post the feedback in the first chap, or is it fine with you?

I know of it being a joke, but of course I do pity non-well known and well-written stories being less popular than smut. (I despise smut) I called 'em a "king" despite both our replies already conflicting, and they called me "peasant" :blob_hmm_two:

I recommend others to read this, btw. It's great.

It looks good ATM.

Kinky.

Awesome. We love normalizing disrespect .... not. Definitely an kink issue you need to work on. :blob_unamused:

Here's the deal. I skim through your story, be as nice as possible with honest feedback and critique, and you sleep at night with miserable thoughts about your writing (maybe). I also have a great borderwall. 1. I will NOT read SMUT. 2. I will NOT read BL, GL, or GB. NO EXCEPTIONS (unless it...

I don't get the internet persona thing on SHF. It's odd.

Good writing. I skimmed through, and I found a problem you need to work on; > you're telling, not showing. What you need to do is show instead of tell what the characters are feeling straight up. (Basically, don't be straightforward.) Here's an extremely basic example: WRONG -- He grew angry...

Never written one before. Lol.

I wonder why people leave. :blob_unamused: You're a smut enjoyer, I get it. Pretty low to return hatred when someone tries to be nice to you. Nice job, now we know why you're sad every time you open SHF.

My bad king; but Scribblehub is Scribblehub. Where's the difference? :blob_unamused:

if your story includes the genre, mystery, then it might be okay. otherwise, I highly advise against needlessly using different POV unless it's introducing an Arc-long issue.

There are a lot of new people, but the issue is.. none of them are being welcomed lol. Their writings aren't even being looked at, and SH basically only support smut stories (those things get popular quickly). You gotta greet everyone, or else there's just going to be dead accounts everywhere...

gravity can bend time btw

of course there's a proper plot for illness. (its a mysterious illness btw, so it's only slowly being uncovered.) and of course, we've hinted whhere his debuffs are coming from.

Funny thing is, more than half of these are included in the plan. We just need to add more.