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The story plan looks sadistic, LOL. MC experiences mental torture AND physical torture all the time. I think unr already implemented the excruciating pain part a bit, but it would be interesting and depressing if it were more.

Sounds like an awesome idea. Would definitely deepen some bonds and add depth to the plot. >I'll tell unr to look at this thread. I was worried about how unr would make the MC an OP one when the MC's magic is debuffed asl. :ROFLMAO:

I am helping on writing a **normal** story with someone that has 10 arcs. (like 40-50 chapters each is the plan) -1. academy (lame arc that is mandatory for world development) -2. grindset -the rest. misery and plot twist (should be fun) unnr3321 is 13 chapters in the story. huzzah! Now I...

It's his story, man. You don't critique the main plot (even if it's Gorey or messed up AF) unless there's plotholes

I WOULD read this. I don't think there's any Nazism involved, other than the fact that you're fucking using Hitler as the main character. Hell, you'd even turn bro into a likable character.

That officer is a thief!

Three Ways to Survive in a Tormenting Life

You need action tags and speaker tags. Here's an example of dialogue in a typical webnovel's style. _____________________________________________________ Xavier scratched his head before muttering, "Wait... Min-Jun? Isn't that the ..." "Weak moron?" Choi Yeong-Ja finished for him. "Yeah, he...

i've been playing more than writing.

1) boredom, a vision, a look to make a story story good for me. 2) it's what I like. no smut, no harem, subtle love, action, and a tragedy. 3) nope. only utopia-dystopian and the like.

normally, I just have a go at it and revise until I feel content. if you want a Naruto-type arc battle.... like they said, think about terrain, emotions, cause & effect, etc. but if it's a quick battle, think about the main point of why they're fighting. think about what their powers are, how...

utopia masked dystopian story where the way society acts is extremely exaggerated. there was no plan for it so I dropped it, though thee backstories and prologues were interesting. basically a slice of life but more sci-fi.

i'm reading a story where the MC has an ungodly amount of power restrictions. it's not smut or anything, it's calm b4 the storm & I'm working w/ the author a bit on the story (just reviewing etc. like an editor). (I saw his 10 paged story plan) it's definitely worth reading.

the MC suffers regardless, even if he cant handle it he has plot armor tho

Selaphiek. A character that represents me.

encouragement, I assume. Not a unique poem, but it's cool. nice poem.

1) one: make them 1v1 and the stronger wins by mini-circumstance. two: describe it the power difference (aura like Goku). three: give character A a slightly stronger power. four: say character A is more experienced. 2) one: like wuxia worlds, there can be "breakthroughs". two: include an...

The ability to take over someone's body for 5 seconds, but then your body is unconscious when you do.

A friend I'm (barely) helping here is writing to get to the middle and near end of his story. I saw his story plan and world build and it was interesting. The beginning? Not so much, it looked like he used the beginning to get the readers used to how the SC and MC acts and the world-build via...

Think about what your story will be about. A story I'm (barely) helping a friend with is about some guy with mysterious ??? disease preventing him from using magic in a magic-based world. If you have a main quirk in your story that differentiates your story from the rest, make the climax...