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So true, king. I feel like it's more interesting when the one being GB is straight physically & objectively. (Ex. mtf paired with his childhood male friend) much more interesting That's interesting

What was the story plan? Are you actively working on it? If not, what slows down the progress of your story? Also, have you ever thought of such an awesome plot but didn't have time to execute it? New or unpopular authors, you can also promote your story in this thread. I'm a reader and an...

I would have checked it out more if it didn't include smut! So sorry. ....But your story looks good so far! :blob_wink:

Your paragraphs are too clumped up. Dialogue and speaker notes should be their own paragraphs. Example from your story: “Dare to speak to the master like this, you traitor? Haven't you surrendered yet? Huh, you damn…..” yelled a man in a red robe without finishing his head land on the ground...

common issue with novice authors. top ten divine writing advice is not to get swayed by the reader, or ur storyline will come down to waste I observe how other stories go, the popular cliches, how other authors write and all that. also grammar is very important, and formatting, too

a small time author I'm reading just puts [...] on tstuff that Readers might already know or you can just copy and paste and log the previous stats on a document to waste less time

literally, no. but if he is a member of scribble hub, and that's ur definition on "beloved member," yea sure. anyway, my point is: don't talk if you're gonna talk abt ur depression and not even trying to welcome properly. if you have time or energy to yap abt urself, just welcome the newbie...

"""""""""beloved"""""""" member

OK. -- : "Not in the mood for a welcome" .... don't say anything then "since I'm suffering from depression atm..." wow... we are so interested "but here's my illustration for the same purpose." I didn't see any illustrations, depressed-kun..

Ok then don't respond simple as

What's the difference?

I usually write on a different document, proof read, edit, then I finally upload the chapter on a website.