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I know you've done a review for my book, The Miserably Macabre tales of Luna Samuels before, but I'm curious if you've put it in any of your videos before? You definitely don't have to, but I'd be interested in participating if you'd be interested.

I really appreciate your time and your review and I'm really glad you knew your limit and didn't read past what you were comfortable. Luna's story is not my life story, but mirrors mine and others close to me in several ways. I'm happy to report that I am years clean of self-harm and am writing...

Thank you so much for your feedback. This is my first draft and I intend to go back through it with a fine tooth comb with the feedback I've been collecting recently and make my novel even better! Your review is well thought out and helpful, thank you so much little chickies! I struggle with...

Basically what the title says, I'd love to hear your thoughts on my story! If you'd like to R4R let me know. "My name is Faith Elizabeth Samuels. Well, it used to be, before I left my fundamentalist helicopter parents and started going by Luna... My counselor tells me writing will help me to...

You have a good idea and interesting premise. I read your first chapter and it's good, but there's a few minor issues I think you might wanna take into account. Your synopsis appears to tell us most of the story from what I can tell. A good synopsis gives away hints of what is to happen, but...

Slice of life, to me is very much about showing the daily lives of your characters and showing their personalities. In my experience, writing good slice of life is hard but rewarding, as your characters have to carry the story. If your character isn't engaging/likeable/interesting enough, your...

I humbly offer my story, The Miserably Macabre Tales of Luna Samuels as potential chicken feed. Trigger Warning: Do be advised, if any of your chickies have an allergy to non-explicit mentions of self-harm, mental health issues and suicidal thoughts, my story may upset your chicken's tummies...

Hello! Thank you so much for your time and effort put into this, review forums like this one have given me so much insight into what I'm doing right and things I've done correctly. If you have the time and if my story intrigues you, you're welcome to take a look at my story. WARNING: This...

Hello! If you're interested, here's my story! Warning: It contains depictions of mental health issues including self-harm and depression. None of it is particularly graphic or explicit, but it can be very intense for some readers. There is a slowburn sapphic romance subplot, but there is no smut...

So I went into canva and tried to make better covers. I both love and hate the new ones.

Thank you so much for taking the time to read my little story. It's very close to my heart and my labor of love. It's my love letter to anybody who's ever gotten out of high school and gone "now what?" Your comments are very insightful and I really appreciate you taking time out of your day to...

Hello! I'm sure you're probably swamped with requests, but if you happen to have the time, I'll throw my hat in the ring. Warning: Has self-harm, suicidal thoughts, etc. It can be very heavy at points, but is not explicit with gore or sexuality. Also, you might be very confused if you try to...

My husband keeps me busy too, so I feel you XD. I'd prefer here in the chat so we can communicate back and forth. <3

Hello! I want to start off by saying you write beautifully, painting a deep, sorrowful narrative of the main character as he struggles with his Vampirism. My main constructive criticism is there are several places where the purple prose is a little too descriptive, if that makes sense. Here...

Thank you! I have added numbers!

So immediately, the first chapter is much better. There's still the occasional re-using of words in the same paragraph (You could sap out 'vision for gaze in one paragraph), but it's MUCH less noticeable this time around. The lore is much more integrated into your text and instead of...

So, I don't expect you to review my story, as I did not leave a proper review on yours, but I did want to give you some of my thoughts just as an outside perspective. I'm not a huge fan of RPG anything, so yours catching my eye is a bit of a feat! I really like how you're building the world and...

Hello! I don't know if you're still doing these, but if you are and would like to, you're welcome to come read my story. I will warn you, it does contain themes of self harm, generational and religious traumas. It does NOT contain any of your stated icks, though, so no worries there...

I so appreciate you taking the time to read through my book! You're right, the tenses switched around a lot in the first few chapters, as I wasn't sure which tense I wanted to go with, which is my own fault for not editing. I'm going to finish the first draft and go back and edit the entire...