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My feeble brain had to google the Danse Macabre! This shall be fun indeed! ^w^

I'm pretty thick-skinned, so take a shot at it if you'd like! Or don't, maybe I don't deserve the pleasure of your snarkiness :P https://www.scribblehub.com/series/862159/the-miserably-macabre-tales-of-luna-samuels/

-Title: Your thoughts about the title exactly mirror my own. I originally thought it might detract from the story but as I've written more, it fits really well and sets the rather snarky tone of the whole book. That and it's memorable, easy to search for. -Chapter Titles: I have heard multiple...

Hello love, if you have the time and desire, would you consider checking out my story? I will warn you that it has heavy themes of depression, anxiety, self harm and trauma. It is not explicit, but due to the nature of the heavy themes, it can be disturbing to some readers. If you're interested...

This is an interesting take on feedback! These are things I've been wondering about if my story has an effective cover/synopsis/etc. Let me know your thoughts. Criticisms welcome! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/862159/the-miserably-macabre-tales-of-luna-samuels/ I've also been wondering if...

Please be kind to yourself and take your time. I'm sure everyone here will be happy to read your comments when you are able to give them. Your work here is very much appreciated!

All criticisms will be used to improve future drafts and editions of my story. <3 Thank you. *There are no perfect people in this story; no villains, no perfect protagonists and no fairytale romance. There is, however, realistic examples of neurodivergence, discovering yourself, LGBTQIA...

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it ^-^

Might I throw my hat in the ring? Warning: Non-explicit violence and mentions of self harm. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/862159/the-miserably-macabre-tales-of-luna-samuels/

That context makes this whole passage make more sense now and is likely reader error rather then a flaw in your writing! I only have the one work, but I do caution you if it is not your cup of tea, do not force yourself to read it. It deals with heavy themes of self-harm as well as various...

I am now further into Chapter 7, one minor criticism here. -'I went to the balcony, opened it, and looked outside just in time to see a small huddle of 'gleaners' going out into the wastes to scrape what fungus and plant life would grow on the glaciers and frosted sheets of ice nearby, and also...

The commenter above me is rude, please disregard them. I will say, there are some words you use that don't quite make logical sense in the sentence they're written. I mean they don't flow well with the rest of the scene. -I’d taught Fantasia how to sew at a young age, but she’d never quite...

So I took a gander, and do forgive me, as I am not the best writer, but I do have some feedback. -“Do you know what makes a great warrior, dearly beloved?” I asked Eris on that airless, rainy summer night on our porch steps. She looked at me, thinking over the puzzle I had posed, her...

Hello! I love this idea! I am a below average writer, so I'll take some below-average feedback if you're willing :blob_teehee: ! Provided, of course, you like the premise and would like to read it, as I understand my novel is decidedly not everyone's cup of tea. If you like the premise, read as...

Hello, I so appreciate the work you're doing. If you like snarky, slow-burn LGBTQ coming of age stories, you're welcome to give mine a look. It does contain some depictions of S/H and violence, but they are not explicit and don't go on for very long. I have 12 chapters and 29k words currently...