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  1. SummerSweetTea

    Free bad feedback thread

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/831295/gemstone-princess-the-rise-of-amalia/ Good/Bad, I'll take any thoughts lol you can post here if you'd prefer but I wouldn't mind a review/rating or some chapter comments if that's easier for you Thanks : )
  2. SummerSweetTea

    Free feedback thread.

    Hello! You reviewed my first chapter some time ago and I've made significant changes to the beginning of the story since then. Not so much chapter 1 (it still needs a bit of a rework) but beyond that. There's no more same-sex scene at all, it's been completely removed and I now have a lot more...
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    Multiple Novels/Stories or just one big book

    If it were ever published, my story as I have it planned would be 2-3 books but as of right now, I'm only maybe half way through what would be the first book so I'm not putting a lot of thought in to it yet. For here online though I doubt I'll really divide it up.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    If you could possibly give me a brief example, I would appreciate that. Thank you.
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    Does a villain always have to be redeemed?

    I've always thought most villains in Disney had pretty rough deaths... I mean, Clayton in Tarzan falls through the vines in the jungle and hangs himself. But in general, no, not every villain is meant to be redeemed. Some are just beyond saving. That being said, there are times when it's okay...
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    [temporary closed :: busy writting]?Raymann's Free Feedback Shop?

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/831295/gemstone-princess-the-rise-of-amalia/ Genre: Fantasy/Romance/Drama/Adventure I'm mostly looking for general feedback, if it's enjoyable and anywhere that is lacking/slow/boring.
  7. SummerSweetTea

    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Thank you so much for checking out my story :) I really appreciate your time and your comments. Someone else did suggest I expand on the dagger scene and give more life to the merchant and the knifes story so I think I will end up reviewing that. I hope you keep reading!
  8. SummerSweetTea

    Feedback thread from me.

    I see you have a few already posted here for your viewing pleasure but if you are interested, I'm always willing to hear some opinions. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/831295/gemstone-princess-the-rise-of-amalia/
  9. SummerSweetTea

    What's your Magic Systems

    Magic comes from a Gemstone that is bestowed upon you when you visit a sacred spring/well. Some people don't get one at all. Everyone can do basic magic as everyone is born with their Soul Gemstone but to do advanced or specialized magic, you had to have received a Gemstone from the well. It's...
  10. SummerSweetTea

    Discussion about "write for yourself" when writing romance.

    Haha in my opinion, love works relatively the same regardless of the world you're in or how fantastical the setting is. Feelings are feelings.
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    Discussion about "write for yourself" when writing romance.

    One pairing might be more electric and exciting and seem more appealing but that doesn't necessarily make for a good, solid relationship. For example, female MC meets someone and they build things over time, there's a connection there that runs deeper. Maybe they're kept apart for whatever...
  12. SummerSweetTea

    How many chapters to save up before launching new work?

    I would say 5-10 depending on how fast the first chapters flow from your fingers. If you have a lot of ideas, go for 5 and post 1 or 2 a week and get things moving. I have chapters scheduled to post about twice a week for the rest of the month so I have some time to write some new stuff lol
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    Contact With Readers

    I made a Discord but I haven't done much with it yet. I would love for people to join it and talk to me about my story and my characters. I think that would be so much fun lol but for now, comments and such here on SH is how I've communicated with people so far.
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    What's up with the MC always having some tragic background story? Views on this.

    My MC technically has a tragic backstory but she also grew up being unaware of it so she lived a relatively normal life until things and stuff. Pretty much everyone else already touched on the reasons for it. "Call to action" is definitely a thing and for most people, that call would be...
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    How to write a certain scene?

    I read through a few of the replies and I agree to describe the table manners and how they're eating.. tearing into it roughly so that pieces of spittle is flying out of their mouth, maybe eating things with their hands that should be with a utensil, licking their fingers clean or even using...
  16. SummerSweetTea

    When...

    When you have no idea what skimming bot and pre-scalp chapter means...
  17. SummerSweetTea

    New Series Comment Request Thread

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/831295/gemstone-princess-the-rise-of-amalia/ Fantasy, romance, drama, magic
  18. SummerSweetTea

    Word Count

    I personally aim for about 1.5-2.5k for my chapters. I've been splitting up my longer chapters into two when I post on here. I want someone to be able to read the chapter even if they don't have a ton of time to dedicate to it at that moment.
  19. SummerSweetTea

    Feedback & Help on Fantasy/Romance/Adventure Story

    Bumping this to say that I've made some pretty big changes to the early chapters - no more confusion on the girls love tag : ) I have 10 chapters posted as of writing this and I'm fully appreciating all of the feedback I've gotten so far. I'm open to hear more, as well.
  20. SummerSweetTea

    Puppet's Feedback Thread (pay with comments)

    Haha, like the name suggests, I like sweet tea. But I also like fruity flavors and also chai. I also enjoy milk tea. The Prologue: Thank you. The prologue is definitely meant to focus on the feelings happening at that moment, the urgency and pain being felt by the woman. Chapter 1: I will...
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