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https://www.scribblehub.com/series/831295/gemstone-princess-the-rise-of-amalia/ Always willing to hear some feedback!

We are all waiting for you to post yours. I think these maps look awesome! I have a very rudimentary one that I basically made in Paint lol but nothing cool like these maps. I love it.

I have a clear main character and 3-4 secondary mains. However, I have many named characters that have varying relevance to the story. Most are needed for specific reasons and then move out of the story once their part is done. Perhaps 20 or so that will be introduced as needed and several more...

Giving this a little boost to say I completely redid the chapters with my MC and her best friend. I expanded on their friendship and changed the reaction the MC has to her friends confession. I ended up adding a lot but I like it. It may still need some work as it's the first go at these new...

Hi! I just overhauled my first few chapters and adjusted some plot points which were proving to be an issue. All posted chapters are up to date now as of Aug. 22. I made a lot of changes in particular with the scenes with Samara. I've added two completely new scenes and removed another. I'm...

What is it, really, that makes them so different other than how it's consumed?

It was written with the original plan of being physically published or maybe an ebook.

Minor conflicts being resolved throughout seems reasonable but it just seems wrong to me to have two or three major obstacles resolved up neatly all in one book. But then there is the worry about dragging it out too much... so many things to trigger my anxiety haha

Well if I've learned anything from my short time here, climaxes get attention :P

In my original file where I've been working on things, my chapters are longer.. 3k to some even pushing 5k but when I post them here, 1.5 to 2k is where I'm aiming so most of my chapters get split into 2 chapters.

Would you rather read a single story with multiple conflicts that resolve at different times, aka multiple climaxes or would you rather see this spread out over two or three books and spend the time to throughly deal with each conflict?

I am very much leaning towards rewriting the scene with Samara to be a gentle rejection because the more I think on it, it just seems like the more natural response. In Amalia's defense though, as written it is very confusing and difficult for her as she realizes she likes main boy. She really...

The ultimate goal is to tell Amalia's story, how she faces the truth about who she is, and what is expected of her. Her journey to discover this part of herself that was denied to her because of someone's vendetta against her family... choices she'll make which will impact her personal future...

I did take out that part when I attempted a rework on the synopsis earlier today, so hopefully that curbs some of that confusion... as it is currently written, Amalia is kind of confused about how she feels but I know how she feels and it isn't going to end with Samara lol She was included in...

So I am being presented with two separate thoughts here and I am on the fence on how I feel about it. There are two different places where this can apply in the story I am currently writing... https://www.scribblehub.com/series/831295/gemstone-princess-the-rise-of-amalia/ I will try and make...

Thank you for reading. I didn't tag it GL because it's just that one scene and I didn't want people going into it hoping/expecting for a GL story. It isn't. The main love interests moving forward are male/female. I sort of felt torn because I didn't want people to NOT know it was there but I...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/831295/gemstone-princess-the-rise-of-amalia/ I am working on this story and one place I am really struggling is the synopsis so I would appreciate some feedback on that. Also just in general looking for some early reads and reviews. Any thoughts are...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/831295/gemstone-princess-the-rise-of-amalia/ I've made a few adjustments based on some feedback I got before. I shortened the chapters to be better suited for reading on a phone.