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I like poems because it tells your allys what your casting but -presumably- your enemies aren't familiar with your spells so may take longer to catch on.

4 different people or just the one?

No, there are not too many. There would need to be some sort standard about what a reasonable number of vampires is for it to be possible to have too many. There is no maximum number of vampires which would be reasonable therefore the answer must be "no".

A high stakes fight seems less high stakes if it's possible for a system glitch to randomly turn the demon lord into a goat. Or turn back time when the hero is going to die. In other words does the reader view system glitch as a mechanism for plot armour? Two ways of fixing this make glitches...

Nano seemed most destructive, eventually it would float to other planets and goo them. Next other solar systems.

You want the power to either have a counter/weakness, be situational or work best with other people. Healers basically require other people. Pyrokinesis is useless when fighting a sea monster. What if you fall into a well. What if someone else does? infinite hp makes tou the perfect tank but can...

Bad as in bad for the character, is just them dying. The worst ending or one that has filled me with the most sense of frustration is when a book was dragging on but I kept reading because I wanted a mystery of the world answered, I got the reveal, it was barely better than saying it was all a...

Short answer: no long answer: The high stakes of might need to scroll for ages won't be as high stakes for the reader. You can have the dialogue of them complaining but that will get real annoying real fast. I'd worry this would lower the tension without giving anything in return. Probably not a...

I want to assume that whatever device has the audiobook also has books relevent for all of the childs schooling and possibly as many other books as can feasibly fit. I did some googling and the physical space for the storage to fit every book ever written isn't actually that much. (1000 SD...

I think it's considering the affect of internet access. It could be a way to satisfy the character's curiosity allowing for a more curious character than the premise would otherwise allow. Could actually use for stuff happening in the middle. Or give library access (digital or physical), as a...

Does it need to be three different worlds? If they got sent to the same one it would take less writing to follow their journey and if you intersperse them between the main plot you won't leave them behind. Also, how well do the readers know about the plot ball and how will they react to this...

Might depend on how it is written. It definitely can be. Specifically if futa is written as man with boobs then I think not. Written as women with dick then yes. Written so futa doesn't fit as either of those means the gender of futa is fundamentally queer and as such you would have a queer...

I got scribble hub yandere.

Presumably scribblehub is remembering that it had been previously published, so if you copy and paste it to a new chapter then it may work. Alternatively it remembers the name and if so you may need to publish it with a slightly different name. Name shouldn't matter, I just checked if I could...

Your unreliable narrator 1 want to narrate 2 not be restrained against whimsy/ be allowed to get sidetracked 3 be able to observe the world one example that comes to mind is a spirit/ghost who doesn't have anything to do now that they've died and narrating is the least boring task. Think: lots...

One lives in my stomach. Other other swims around in my blood I don't think this is healthy.

I'll say about a 50/50 chance

add in curse of not believing your cursed. On it's own its fine but put it with another An item that lowers the strength of other enchanted items. Not so bad if you're only wearing cursed items but if it's useful or hinders other magic (non-item) that's helpful...

I can so beyond a shadow of a doubt that even if every tiger decided that they wanted me dead then I would still have a decent shot at survival. How? There's an ocean between me and them.

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