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That's because "drank his coffee" is not a speaking action. That's like saying somebody shot someone with "Loading his gun, he took aim and ordered lunch." That's just not what those words mean. You're a writer. Your words should be enough to get across how your characters are feeling. If your...

They are famous. They're the ones who have figured out how to exploit their classes to the point that they regularly run dungeons with level recommendations twice as high as their own. Yes

That's not the vibe I'm going for

Yes, they're part of a guild

My WIP is a litrpg that follows a small team of adventurers who are famous for taking on dungeons that are way higher levels than them and winning. I'm having trouble coming up with a name for them, though. I thought about "Team Underdog" or "The Underdogs" but I'm pretty sure that word's been...

White sauce is better on pizza than red sauce

Yeaaaah, no. You don't get to ask for feedback, insult people because you don't like the feedback you get, and then cry "WHY ARE YOU BEING SO MEAN TO MEEEEEE?!" when they hit back. You are obviously way too thin skinned to be putting anything on the internet. My best advice, and I'm being 100%...

Here's the difference between me and you: I made a typo. You don't know how to write a book.

Neither are you. You should go meet some of those other people. Maybe one of them will reach you how to write.

If that's the case, then I must be a historical revisionist given how often I delete and rewrite stuff.

Uhh...yes, I literally did say that going into a story worrying more about pushing a message than telling the story was bad. And others did say the same thing. You're not doing a good job of convincing anyone that you aren't just blocking out the opinions you don't like.

You: "Is this bad?" Me and Others: "Yes." You: "Nuh uh! Keep your hate to yourself!" In other words, yes, you're just fishing for validation.

If you can't be bothered to proofread your post when you're asking people to read your story, why would we assume that your book isn't also filled with spelling mistakes and bad grammar?

Sounds like you've made up your mind for better or worse, so why are you asking? Are you just fishing for validation at this point?

Yes, it's a bad thing. When the first thing on an author's mind is how they're going to preach to their audience, the story will always turn out bad. Entertaining the audience with a well written story is the only thing they need to worry about. Any "lesson" the story teaches will come about...

Melee range, but highly mobile. I like it when a fight has the participants moving around a lot, constantly changing positions and having to adapt to shifting battlefield. Like how mistborn will steeljump around like human pinballs in Mistborn.

Writing memes. Share them here. I command it.

Henry Rider starts the story with inhalers filled with laughter that recharge her powers, one of which is accelerated healing.