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  1. Bimbanana

    SHF High-school Fanfic

    1777 is when William Wallace fought for American independece against the Brits!
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    Secrets of the one above game

    The one above me telling something everybody knows
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    Secrets of the one above game

    The one above me secretly eats beef
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    How long does it take you to write 2500 words?

    Depends Did i opened the forums or not on that day
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    Feedback for my second novel pweaseee

    Hmm, never think so much about it. I guess its more of the omniscient third POV written in cinematic style thingy
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    Bouncy

    Bouncy
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    Secrets of the one above game

    The one above me secretly loved the song: Bim is banana! B-A-N-A-N-A~ Edit: ok, now he's becoming three above me
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    Secrets of the one above game

    The one above me highly confused the definitions of milk Edit: Dont horn as long as that belongs to male???
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    Secrets of the one above game

    The one above me too lazy to finish his sketch for his profile pic
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    How's everyone?

    I feel like i wanted to annoy people today
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    Character Jumping

    Yeah i do that a lot in my story its basically becoming my style. Several characters POV jumps in one arc. Some readers like it, some dont. Just write it confidently and coherently
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    As a reader, which of the following are your most tolerant and least tolerant: story content, storytelling, and language?

    And it feels even worse once you start writing your own story. You hit writer’s block not because you’re lazy (maybe), but because you don’t want to betray your own story logic or your characters. You actually care about consistency. That’s why it drives me insane when I watch some of the...
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    As a reader, which of the following are your most tolerant and least tolerant: story content, storytelling, and language?

    1. What I tolerate the most is language errors. I’m not a native English speaker anyway, so I’m definitely not an English supremacist. A lot of what I read is translated from other languages, so imperfect language doesn’t really bother me. 2. What I absolutely can’t tolerate is errors in the...
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    Do you ever ‘cast’ your characters?

    I only wanted Morgan Freeman to be my narrator
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    Feedback for my second novel pweaseee

    Watching Dinosaur on Netflix (God bless Morgan Freeman) makes me wanted to create this chapter. Oh, this scifi story is about a family of spacefarers dragons. With Sugar the little sister, Johny the big brother, and Maya the AI Please let me know what you think Oh, i shall call the Review and...
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    Does it look like the description?

    Its adorable. Remind me of my kid drawing. Uhh, what's the assignment again?
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    Targeted Story Feedback Thread (READ THE NOTE)

    This! This is something that i really wanted to be. Sigh... although i realize its still a long way for me to reach this. I'll keep learning to perfecting my craft and hopefully i reach this level of cultivation one day.
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    Targeted Story Feedback Thread (READ THE NOTE)

    Thank you so much!! Its really a good way to start my day by reading this
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    What do YOU like to see in a story?

    Consistent story logic Consistent characters I think those two are the keys But then again i was only about to touch my sixth months. I guess my list will grow when i touch six year like you
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    Such an accusation, sir! I’m an introvert who only received two messages the entire day—one...

    Such an accusation, sir! I’m an introvert who only received two messages the entire day—one from my wife, and the other from my mother in-law asking about my wife!
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