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This thread is so dangerous yet wholesome at the same time... Just make your char likeable, but don't nsfw them. Your fanbase will do the rest for you

If you want to reduce its questionable trope, then make a plot that mc have no choice but to do the raid. Like a system make them do so, or something happen to their fr and only a g's p*nty could help him, or he try to make a potion, but one of the ingredients is a g's p. Better yet? Make it an...

This is quite funny, actually. Girliance?

i see, thanks for the feedback, that's actually helpful! (funny how my gerne tag fall into 90% of your 'I will not accept no matter what', only 10% left for it to be on display)

It's quite funny consider your name is literally Adam (no offense, just a name of a character who does that thing i said) What if the coincidence was so often that you suspicious of what is going on? and later the protagonist also suspicious of his coincidence and decide to investigate it?

hello, if you don't mind gender bender tag, pls check out my story, thanks! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1793994/

what about you thought it was a coincidence, but it was actually not? what if it was a throughout plan of someone else who intentionally make it that way? What if your whole life, your whole adventure was a plan of some unknown existence? that you are just follow a script of somebody? will it...

im gonna steal this one, thanks!

you can try both version. i generally like third POV, but first POV also fine. i think first POV is harder to get into since we are limited by our own perspective, and it tend to repeative real fast if not done well. First POV would really suitable in horror genre, tho

i think your taste was just change. Read your book again from the beginning, or found other book that you found interesting that you couldn't resist to write again

i'm also new here, so good luck!

i only do like 500 words a day (if i'm writing). the rest would be spend time to check character quirk, thinking lore, research world building to not break immesion

what about children character with mature mind?

Probably good if no one caught on it.

That's nice