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Well, I doubt anyone here will he interested, since my story is a fanfiction, but might as well. Here it is, Hololive English: A Destined Battle! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/578154/hololive-english-a-destined-battle/ If anyone here is a fan of Hololive, especially EN, I'm 100% sure...

Yes, I value him a lot. But I mentioned him as an example that even when you give as much detail as possible, the artist can still misunderstand something, especially if English isn't their first language. I was trying to say that it would be lame if the artist messed up, then considered it a...

I guess that's fair, but it also depends on what they consider a rework. I could give my friend as much details as I can, but sometimes he'd just misunderstand what I said and draw something I didn't want. Then obviously, I'd have to point it out to him and tell him that he drew it incorrectly...

Wait, artists don't do this when you commission them? I don't see anything unreasonable about that, it just sounds like common sense, the commissioner should be involved with the making of the commission as much as the artist. I asked my friend to drew my cover photo for me and he just kept...

oh that was easier than I thought, thanks! Is it small enough now?

sorry, how do I make it smaller? I didn't even know it was gonna be that big, first time posting in a forum after adding it to my signature

Not counting how terribly formatted my early chapters used to be, one advice would probably be "just because you posted a chapter, doesn't mean it's too late to fix its mistakes. " Seriously, I remember posting a chapter and then linking it in the server to get opinions, and when a guy told me...

Absolutely! Not naming them just looks boring and lazy. Just a number doesn't tell me anything. You can do many things with a few words in the name. Making a pun for something that happens in that chapter, or you could even do some kind of foreshadowing. One of my favorite things to do is coming...

yes, that's what I meant, that the fight would continue during the conversation, and then I'd return to it once one of the fighters notice the nonsense going on below them. well, they're not supposed to be bulging their eyes out at it, they're supposed to have a conversation, which is also...

The conversation should be near over by the time the fighters notice it. Or, even if it would continue, the spectators would notice that they're about to do an epic move, so they stop talking and continue watching them again. I was more thinking, how to move from the fight, into the beginning of...

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Thank you, yours was definitely the most insightful response. The AI one was, as you said, too much flavory language, I couldn't even understand some of those words... But what would you say in a 2v1 scenario? That is currently the one I'm writing. 2 good guys vs 1 bad guy. And also, might be...

uhhh I don't think you understood my question. Did you read the whole post?

Allow to to elaborate. Say there are 2 characters fighting, and there are also a couple others that are just watching that fight. How would you transition from describing the fight, onto a conversation, which the characters who are watching the fight, are having? How I usually do it is, when I...

I haven't read the story, but I just gotta say, 16 reading and 10 plan to read is pretty good for having only 3 chapters and 4k words. You're not losing readers, you just gotta keep posting. And some people are just waiting for more chapters to come out to binge read it.

My friend drew The Ancient Ones for my HololiveEN fanfiction :D He's currently working on another drawing for my story. He hasn't drawn a cover photo for it yet though, I just couldn't come up with one lol. Art by Kurono#5453

I'm not sure what you mean by "stating when the effect is present or diminishes". Did I say those things twice in the same scene? Maybe it just happened twice, I'm not sure. I gotta leave for work rn so I don't have the time to read the whole chapter lol. Oh and yes, your suggestion definitely...

Well, there's a couple reasons as to why everyone is just standing there. First, there has to be someone protecting Amelia, Ina, and Gura's body from the fight. Second, Kiara wants to kill The Ancient Ones the most out of everyone there. While Fauna does know both Gura and Ame longer, she is not...

Hello, as the title suggests, I would like some feedback/opinions on this fight scene in my story. This is my first time writing a story and I'm always insecure about writing fight scenes and this one especially I wasn't sure how to write but, I think I did it good. Would love to hear some...