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Aight, I just finished your novel~ Some criticism - Pardon my ignorance, but as I said I wasn't too familiar with the themes in your novel (I live in Asia), so a lot of exposition was a bit hazy for me - Couple of grammatical errors here and there, some a bit jarring to the immersion -...

Haha I'm on the other side, I think I'm too fast. I write about 3000 words a day right now as a university student - sometimes I get locked in and just pump out paragraphs. I find this style a bit too reckless for my liking, but I don't like not writing when my brain juices are flowing lol

Ooh that's an interesting take, but I think I agree Good perspective! I may be new but I'm already struggling to share the screen time for certain characters, trying to make sure they develop equally. The plot has to move at a pace that caters for their overall development as well. It really...

Ah yeah, I try to be aware of those flaws you mentioned in my own story as well. I still have a long way to go to reach your progress, and my story is is still young but I already love it and its characters, even if they aren't perfect

If you had to criticise your story, what would it be? Is there one aspect you find lacking? I'm a new writer who just started writing a week ago, and I've been mostly freestyling my plot as it goes. I rely a lot on random sparks of enlightenment, like when I'm writing, figuring out how the...

Hey there, I would love to get some feedback from you as well! It's my first time writing, but I hope I executed it well enough for your appraisal:blob_evil_two: my story

Hi! I'd be down to read your novel. My own story has about 13k words (15k in a few hours), and is based around people with superpowers in a futuristic fantasy school However I'm not too familiar with heavy socio-political exposition, so my feedback might be a bit more focused on the other...

If done right, I wouldn't mind it! my story

I'm down to read the first 6 chapters of your story, if that's okay with you. I'm only up to Chapter 6 on my own story haha Just a heads up that I'm new here and have never written a review :sweat_smile:

Ah thanks! You're right, I'll take note of my descriptions for my future chapters. Yeah I meant to refer to her as a petite girl

When the retired legend comes back and shows they still got it I'm thinking of ways on how to incorporate that into my story

Allister Bartholomew Cornelius Donnington V People call him ABCDV My story

I've always wanted to write my own story and build my own characters, and I finally got down to doing it~ There are only 5 chapters at the moment, but I would appreciate criticism on any aspects that you find to be lacking so I can take those into consideration when writing future chapters...

Hi! I'm new to writing, but I've always wanted to try creating my own story. I have only 5 chapters so far, and I would appreciate your thoughts on it! Broke but Broken: Overpowered in a Fantasy School