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Thank you so much, i'll learn more about it :blobthumbsup::blobthumbsup::blobthumbsup:

Ah I see, if i want to use First POV, i should focus more on "what i feel" yes? Interesting, i didn't think about it. Thank you, you hit the point where i want to point it out the MC fighting style and mindset, it will explain more later on about his psychological side when his current style...

what the fuck, HAHAHAHHAA for me, first time i read something like that when i was 9th grade. I got that kind of novel from local librarian lady so i can "grow up" :blobrofl::blobrofl:

Mine started at 2026, hahahaha I'm usually just enjoy read novel instead writing. But, i did make comic when i was around 11 or 12.

Hi, I need you guys opinion regarding my writing of Tournament Fighting Scene. Is it easy to understand? or which part i should improve? Here's the fighting scene :

God damn, This one is beautiful artwork!

I'm interested on Kim's personas development actually. And in my opinion, If you make Ethan have personality shift, it will be more interesting as the pivot of the story.

Whoa, this is interesting, I presume you're planning to make deep character development for this novel?

I think most of us will playing game too, hahaha but since gaming is my main daily routine for past 2 years (almost 8 hours a day), my off-hours will be playing guitar, getting drunk with my girl, sometimes i'm writing (this one is new actually, i found it refreshing to vent anything inside my...

If you're using AI, i suggest change the voice for Utopia with Female voice with calmer tone color. In my opinion, it will be better to match the current keys. The second song pretty good.

Isn't it being imperfect make the characters become more alive? In my opinion, worldbuilding that based on "perfect world" only lead to generic worldbuilding. For example, like Game of Throne, it was crossing the line of some moral issues, but that was what made Game of Throne series memorable.

For me, writing stories is like "venting", creating music for "expressing" and other visual arts for "capturing". But i saw some works done here, I think many of you guys writing stories for "expressing". And i'm genuinely curious about it. Is it the reason why many of your stories are well made?

I'm planning to push my writing until chapter 4 this week. I want to expand the memoir to be more detailed, so it'll not sound like rushed story. I'll use explicit Violence and Sexual, because i don't want leave any single detail that will ruin the emotional weight.

Hi, I'm sorry i just got back from abroad. I decided to rewrite whole stories to be more detailed one.

I'll try to rewrite this whole writing, and expand more at chapter 4, maybe i'll split those chapter become 2 later. I'll expand about how we built our business instead just spouting the result. And to give more perspective regarding Claudia.

hmm, more like at structure i must focus on, and whether you get the "feeling" while reading it or not. Because the idea was, I want to make the readers to embrace how it feels.

Greetings, I'm Daeron I'm still super newbie at literature art. Usually I only vent ideas into raw writing for lyrical purposes. But recently, i want to try something new, to turn my part of past story or memoir into "novel story" Your feedbacks are appreciated. Here's my Story : Soft...

Well, if you don't mind, you can review mine too. It's very short story actually, only contain 7 chapters. It's basically years of stories being compressed in to 6219 Words. It's pretty raw, i just use it to vent myself. Cheers. Here's my Story Soft Illusion : Ad Finem Amore

Shup, I'm Daeron. I just uh, like create anything based on mood. Sometimes i create music, sometimes i create a stories, sometimes i just chill and random here and there. I come here actually because my forum friend recommend me to share my raw story that I already made, and post it here. So...