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    Critique me.

    Is it immersion breaking? Because i am new at this and previously when i started reading i felt huge paragraphs were little tiring.
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    Critique me.

    Slaneesh wants to know your location. *Happy degenerate noise* Oh i might include more than that... btw can you review my book if you have some spare some time.
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    Critique me.

    I never thought of it. Now that you mention it, it does sound like that.
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    Critique me.

    Definitely not smut. Its more like slaneesh kind of stuff.
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    Critique me.

    Lol. I might include few sexual scenes in future due to a character and her influence. Damn cover art for your books look amazing.
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    Critique me.

    Thank you, however i am struggling with few things since i am a new writer.
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    Critique me.

    It isn't? Lemme check. Edit- fixed it. You can link your story here, I'll read it when I am free.
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    Critique me.

    i would appreciate if someone critiques me and my book. I welcome any kind of criticism even roasting. You can check it out here.
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    One Word Review

    If you can spare some time, i would appreciate your review on rest of my book. You can check it out here. By the way i like your profile pic.
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    How does ranking work?

    "Nice meeting you too, my audience." (Starts signing about how he ran into a wall while trying to look mysterious)
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    How does ranking work?

    (Puts down the money and walks the opposite way...which has no door)
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    How does ranking work?

    My ongoing novel with less favorites and readers is ranked higher than other novels with more favorites, reviews, and readers. What is going on?
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    Competitive straightforward biased blunt reviewer here

    Actually, I confused you with Laiel, but I like your style of critiquing. Harsh criticism focused strictly on the content resonates with me.
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    Competitive straightforward biased blunt reviewer here

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2170801/bstard-of-abaddon/ Please review my novel. I would appreciate it if you could review all five chapters ?, but it’s fine if you can’t.
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    Need help regarding dark and sensitive themes.

    Forgive me English isn't my first language, so sometimes i get confused.
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    Need help regarding dark and sensitive themes.

    Hey is the word "Powerful" in the last 4th line refers to the secret being powerful?
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    Need opinions on my cover art.

    Sad that i can't fix it right now as i am away from my home.
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    Need opinions on my cover art.

    Wouldn't compression reduce the picture quality?
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