Critique me.

[c37]

i would appreciate if someone critiques me and my book. I welcome any kind of criticism even roasting. You can check it out here.

 

[Hans.Trondheim]

i would appreciate if someone critiques me and my book. I welcome any kind of criticism even roasting.
You can check it out here.

Not that I will read your story because right now, I'm trying to focus on writing my own but...

...just a heads up, the link you provided isn't working.

 

[c37]

Not that I will read your story because right now, I'm trying to focus on writing my own but...

...just a heads up, the link you provided isn't working.

It isn't? Lemme check. Edit- fixed it.

Not that I will read your story because right now, I'm trying to focus on writing my own but...

...just a heads up, the link you provided isn't working.

You can link your story here, I'll read it when I am free.

 

[Hans.Trondheim]

Is isn't? Lemme check. Edit- fixed it.

You can link your story here, I'll read it when I am free.

Yeah, tis working now.

Is isn't? Lemme check. Edit- fixed it.

You can link your story here, I'll read it when I am free.

Ah...well, I'm not really promoting those novels, hence I'll decline your offer. But you can look for those via search function under my name if you're intetested.

 

[MC-Stories]

I only read the synopsis, but already i'm impressed with the story, the sins of the fathers often cary to the son....

 

[c37]

I only read the synopsis, but already i'm impressed with the story, the sins of the fathers often cary to the son....

Thank you, however i am struggling with few things since i am a new writer.

 

[Anonjohn20]

i would appreciate if someone critiques me and my book. I welcome any kind of criticism even roasting. You can check it out here.

No smut. 0/10

 

[MC-Stories]

Me too

Thank you, however i am struggling with few things since i am a new writer.

Beast Heroes: Bianca’s Genisis

Follow the tale of Bianca Verdant, a 10 year old Awakened Beast Hero as she forges her legacy in a world filled with turmoil and Fear, her kndness and understanding being her greatest weapons as she deals the perks and responsibilities of being an 'Early Bloomer'

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Tales of Megacity-0

The City That Time Forgot, Megacity-0 was once a peaceful place, for both Awakened and Non-Awakened, but power can corrupt even the most noble, and it was only a matter of time before the city drowned in it's own blood! Listen to the tales of those who experienced this cruelty...

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Battle Of Megascity-0

Bloodshed, Pain, Suffering, this was the norm during the chaos during the Battle of Megacity-0 listen to the tales of those tired and failed to survive it as well as those who did. Survival of the Fittest was never like this.....

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Here are some of my works

 

[c37]

No smut. 0/10

Lol. I might include few sexual scenes in future due to a character and her influence.

Not that I will read your story because right now, I'm trying to focus on writing my own but...

...just a heads up, the link you provided isn't working.

Damn cover art for your books look amazing.

 

[MC-Stories]

Lol. I might include few sexual scenes in future due to a character and her influence.

Damn cover art for your books look amazing.

I'm not really into smut, Maybe excessive violece and body horror, but that's it

 

[c37]

I'm not really into smut, Maybe excessive violece and body horror, but that's it

Definitely not smut. Its more like slaneesh kind of stuff.

 

[Alski]

i would appreciate if someone critiques me.

Your name sounds like some deathrow inmate.

 

[Hans.Trondheim]

Lol. I might include few sexual scenes in future due to a character and her influence.

Damn cover art for your books look amazing.

Glad you like those. Drew those myself, so if you need anything hand-drawn, you can commish me.

 

[c37]

Your name sounds like some deathrow inmate.

I never thought of it. Now that you mention it, it does sound like that.

 

[L1aei]

Definitely not smut. Its more like slaneesh kind of stuff.

Somebody mentioned Slaanesh?

 

[Eldoria]

Lol. I might include few sexual scenes in future due to a character and her influence.

If you include that weird scene in your story, my parents will spank me. I'm just a fussy little girl.

 

[c37]

Somebody mentioned Slaanesh?
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Slaneesh wants to know your location. *Happy degenerate noise*

If you include that weird scene in your story, my parents will spank me. I'm just a fussy little girl.

Oh i might include more than that... btw can you review my book if you have some spare some time.

 

[HungrySheep]

Why
is
every
sentence
a
new
paragraph
?

 

[L1aei]

Slaneesh wants to know your location. *Happy degenerate noise*

Oh i might include more than that... btw can you review my book if you have some spare some time.

 

[c37]

Why
is
every
sentence
a
new
paragraph
?

Is it immersion breaking? Because i am new at this and previously when i started reading i felt huge paragraphs were little tiring.