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  1. bokhi

    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Wow, that was fast! Thanks for the very interesting (and informative) write-up!
  2. bokhi

    Free First Impressions Feedback Thread

    Intriguing. I'm surprised there are no takers. I'll go first so I can say "first!". The Stormcrow Cycle X-posted on RR as well (if relevant). Thanks!
  3. bokhi

    Reading Novels Aren't Fun Anymore

    Lol, yeah. Their contracts looked terrible, lol. I guess they must be hemorrhaging writers and readers, then? Guess it's a good thing I ignored the follow-up email, lol. Should probably email back and be like, "Nah. Thanks tho!" XD Thanks for the info.
  4. bokhi

    Reading Novels Aren't Fun Anymore

    Wait, did something specific happen with Webnovel, or is this more of a slow decline that's accelerating? They contacted me a month or so ago, actually (out of the blue), and I haven't responded aside from the first acknowledgment email. Would be good to know if there's something up with them.
  5. bokhi

    Are all character capable of redemption?

    Death = redemption.
  6. bokhi

    Opinions upon survival novels

    I like White Fang. (Snerk) Okay, fine, mostly I read survival tales with animal protagonists. I quite enjoyed Kazan and Baree, especially since wolf-dogs are the cutest. As for survival tales with humans, I like those, too, though I haven't read any since I was a teen. I don't think I've...
  7. bokhi

    Your opinion after investing your feelings to a character and the author just end up killing them

    It's fine as long as it's handled well and is a logical or coherent outcome. I don't like it if there's obviously no motive for it other than to distress readers. That's just bad writing.
  8. bokhi

    Harem’s suck

    IAWTC.
  9. bokhi

    I need to know, why do people like this?

    I think @Corty nailed most of it. It's the perception of bad people getting what they "deserve." It's rather interesting. I've put my post under spoiler tags in case there are any Stormcrow readers on the forums. Tl;dr: It's not necessarily that there's anything all that different or unique...
  10. bokhi

    How do I change the banner on my forum profile? [Resolved]

    Good to know! Thanks for the info. =)
  11. bokhi

    Which social media site is the worst?

    Accurate, lmao. They all suck and I don't use any of those platforms except Reddit once in a blue moon to promote my fic. But Reddit also sucks and a huge % of the dudes giving advice clearly belong on r/iamverysmart and are armchair [expert at whatever] at most. It's hilarious but also sad...
  12. bokhi

    How do I change the banner on my forum profile? [Resolved]

    ...Wow, lol. Looks like I'll be able to change my banner in... ...Five years or so? XD XD XD Thanks for the info! =)
  13. bokhi

    How do I change the banner on my forum profile? [Resolved]

    I definitely don't have that button on my profile page, lol. So probably not enough forum posts. Thanks! Ah, I see. So there are basically tiers for customization based on the number of posts. Good to know as well, thank you! :s_smile:
  14. bokhi

    How do I change the banner on my forum profile? [Resolved]

    Oh, I see! I didn't realize it was based on the number of messages posted. Good to know, thank you! :s_smile:
  15. bokhi

    How do I change the banner on my forum profile? [Resolved]

    Sorry if this is a dumb question, but I didn't see it covered in the FAQ or tutorial thread. I noticed that some users have a custom avatar and banner, but other users don't. I am wondering if this has to do with the type of membership one has, similar to Royal Road? Or perhaps I'm just bad at...
  16. bokhi

    How Does It Read?

    I find I agree with much of what @melchi has written. I can see that there are some areas that work very well, but then some sentences are just very confusing. I think the primary issue here is that you're sacrificing clarity for style, but keep in mind, the average reader isn't going to be very...
  17. bokhi

    Unreliable Biased Feedback

    Thanks for expanding on it, it's very helpful! =) Cheers, bokhi
  18. bokhi

    Unreliable Biased Feedback

    Hi greyblob! Thanks for your feedback! I appreciate you taking the time! =) Few quick questions for you. Feel free to not answer since I've already taken up some time by having you read TSC, but there are a few points that were surprising to me (ran the opposite of what I got as feedback in...
  19. bokhi

    Yet another free feedback thread.

    Good day! Thanks for taking a look! Now this is very interesting! I'll say I added the glossary reluctantly because the K'Avaari words are used (by design) in a repetitious way and in context throughout the first act to "teach" the language to the readers, so this is not quite the effect I was...
  20. bokhi

    Your opinion on My Immortal?

    Clearly, it is the greatest piece of literature to date, and nothing will ever top it. Its haters are all philistines who don't understand art. Go read it. All of it. It won't hurt at all.
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