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I voted one of the comments just cause.

Enough to keep my interest, I prefer a longer versus a shorter chapter. But as long as it keeps my interest, it is all good. I can always skip a few days if I desire, to build up chapters, if I feel that they are to short.

Stealth Archer. I stole a girl once from a man who was just to speedy for her tastes.

10 Chapters, is my minimum start point for starting to read anything lately. To many Authors do only a few chapters for their "idea" and then drop what they are writing for lack of commitment to continue on their part for any of a number of reasons. As for length, meh do not care, as long as it...

Cannot miss what you got run over by, and then they backed the F*** over me again. But man was it fun, now I am paying for all of it. :LOL:

Right now I am not liking the MC, but I like the plot idea. So I am neutral.

Are you only doing actual stories for your roast, or would a link to a snippet of a story work? I admit some curiosity how my writing holds up. Considering I have given some authors feed back. But I am not an actual author, myself.

My Critiques, in the long run they do not mean a thing. That you have written and posted a story at all, is well above many that lurk on here, including me. The synopsis would make me skip this, under normal circumstances. Not because it is badly written, just not a story that I would be...

Riverworld, is sorta in that category: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Riverworld#:~:text=The%20Riverworld%20is%20an%20artificial,different%20cultures%20and%20time%20periods. Possibly: https://novelbin.com/b/steampunk-sixth-era-epic Water World is closer to apocalyptic Dieselpunk than Steampunk...

Cheap a** b*t*rds who cannot afford to donate to several Patron accounts and therefore pick and choose who they want to follow. I am one of them, though I have no clue about your particular story. I cannot find your story through your name, as such no clue if your story is actually in the...

I always like the stat and character information stuff to be behind spoilers, that way if I am not interested I can always skip them. Otherwise, only thing I can say, is be consistent with your stats; if normal human is 10 across the board of XYZ stats, I expect a person with 20 in that stat to...

Without Taxation, we would have no services. How good those services are depends on how much in taxes goes towards said services and how much corruption is in the system. If taxes did not exist, then everything would have to be paid for out of pocket immediately when used. Usually the...

A lot of people have already mentioned various MC types I like. But good/bad/ugly/pretty or whatever. It is the ones that grab my attention and make me care about the story and stay invested in the story.

yes

You all lie! The most evil character is always the Author! :LOL: