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i would suggest you to see some ttrpgs. its gets you a basic understanding on how to build a system. and see the novel world as its own and dont try to link your novels world to reality as it ends up as a disasters.

i like both styles. its interesting to read a story in both styles

this is dope af. nice cover :D

thank you for your feedback . i had given a thought on how i would want to end the novel and i have a idea on it, but one thing i don't like the most is making the protagonists op without any setbacks. so i had some rules and world building done that the mc has to follow . the protagonist is op...

haha, have no experience writting smut

its not that the readers have to follow the story strictly as my narrative. my work is subjective thats the thing i want people to know . i feel like the readers knowing the working of world would be more immersed than being confused . but info dumping this hard was a bit of a mistake on my end...

a shovel is useful :D i will be doing it also. i just wanted to let people know what to expect early on . if they are confused in future chapters then they can read back on this . thanks for the feedback will keep it in mind i get you :p thanks will put it in glossary. will sort it out later...

i mean most of the time i see the author has not been in a relationship or doesn't know to write a conflict. these romantic novels create a sense of miscommunication for no apparent reason. and add lack of logic and create some rage baits. lost track on how many romantic novels do it.

i just hate when a mc as a baby or as a kid is op as fuck. a lot of the time they have plot armor saying bs to save their ass. like i am a baby who is reincarnated , in my past life i was a hero . oh this life i am born as a baby. okay and as a baby i killed a beast or defeated a knight who is...

that was my first thought, but i thought if i could explain the world the story takes place in early chapters and i be bound to the world i created. and not create some bs plot armor to protect my characters. its thrilling for me in end as readers know how the world works and how my characters...

a bit high dont you think ?

hello everyone, I would like to hear your feedback on my world building. so please do let me know your criticism of this world building. thank you https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1423510-the-lord-of-malevolence/chapter/1432607/

If life is the dawn, Then death is the dusk. If you rejoice in birth, Then honor the dust. For life holds no meaning Without death’s embrace. To cherish each breath, One must welcome the end.

thanks for the tip, will keep in mind .

not looking for monetization as i want to flesh it out and pump chapters . thank you for the support

thanks for the feedback, while transferring the pages to website from my docs i messed up the formatting. on the dialogs after this line, "O Lord of Malevolence, we worship you! Spare our insignificant lives! We ask only to exist in harmony until the reaper claims us at the rightful end of our...

Thank you for the review. The tone i want to set for this light novel is going to be dark and heavy. I plan to keep the pace which i have set it currently as I feel that goes well with dark theme of the story making readers feel the actions my protagonist makes . About the tense switching I...

Thanks a lot for the help

hello everyone, I have written my first light novel here titled : THE LORD OF MALEVOLENCE recently. i went with grim settings with my protagonist being straight up evil and wanted to know how is the tone , pacing and my grammar in the first 3 chapters as I had to proof read it my self. please do...