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  1. S.D.Mills

    I'd like some deeper insight

    Join the Discord! \(^__^)/ Anyone can feedback upon request in the #workshop channel.
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    Preparing for SSSC III: Prompt Suggestions

    Prompt: A college student is enjoying a Friday night in the city with friends when they end up separated from the rest of the group. When they realize they are lost and have no ride home, they try to call one of their friends. Just then, the entire internet backbone goes dark.
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    The Quote Depository

    @FemmeFatale I love Yeats. I think my favorite line is from The Circus Animals’ Desertion.
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    Need feedback on my story

    I do workshops for writers in the Scribble Hub Discord server. Most of my feedback style requires back and forth communication, so it's hard to do it in a forum. Feel free to hit me up. Discord Server link: discordapp.com/invite/vpxWXQd My Discord username: night0w1
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    Non fiction Genre?

    If you are expecting very many readers, I just want to warn you that this type of work won't be popular or get much attention on a site like this. Having said that, I like the idea. I think there's probably a lot of room on this site for collaborative-style works between multiple authors. I'm...
  6. S.D.Mills

    SSSC II

    Yes.
  7. S.D.Mills

    What are you listening to?

    Post-hardcore and electro-whatever. If it's too loud or someone is screaming, sounds like my jam.
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    The Quote Depository

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    Creating fake Code is hard

    I don't think @lazyredragon is looking for code exactly. It sounded to me like they were asking how things work, so they can explain actions and situations in a way that is plausible while avoiding showing any actual code, which is honestly unnecessary.
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    Creating fake Code is hard

    It's possible I'm mistaken and that it is allowed in the ECMA spec, but I know it's not allowed at runtime for any engine I've used (V8, Node, SpiderMonkey).
  11. S.D.Mills

    Creating fake Code is hard

    To clarify, in JavaScript, you have to instantiate the variable, because a variable is an object, and all objects must be instantiated because in JS everything is an object. I know next to nothing about Python. Teivel makes a good point about mutability. Mutation is a serious problem for games...
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    Creating fake Code is hard

    Yes, that could happen. Also, it IS possible to edit the code as long as it the code edited is not currently instantiated and the system is built in such a way that you can edit text files directly from inside the game. Also, for instance, if the system allowed for direct interaction with the OS...
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    Creating fake Code is hard

    In games, there are bugs and there are mistakes. A mistake is where something works correctly but a human did something they shouldn't have. For instance, making all the in-game premium items super cheap. A bug is an unintended consequence of a piece of code in specific edge cases. Buffer...
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    Creating fake Code is hard

    A script is a piece of code. It cannot be edited, so it can't be damaged. Can a bug look like a virus? It would depend on what you mean. For example, you could have a game that runs on a server (as opposed to a client-only game). A bug that causes a secondary bug could happen. Theoretically...
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    Creating fake Code is hard

    I feel like that kind of story would be very hard to write if you aren't familiar with various things involving game creation. I work in the video game industry, so feel free to ask anything you want from me.
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    Tips on writing the opening line

    There are always exceptions that are so good they make other writers envious. Otherwise, the purpose of the first sentence is the make the reader read the rest of the paragraph. The rest of the paragraph's job is the make the reader unable to stop reading until they turn the page. The first...
  17. S.D.Mills

    Poetry techniques

    Don't forget metonymy, synecdoche, merism, chiasm, and being a know-it-all. :p If I'm honest though, I think pretty much all of these except metaphor should be tossed out the window by newbies. It's like walking into an auto shop and picking up random tools and trying to fix a car without ever...
  18. S.D.Mills

    The Curse of the Tense

    There's a lot of things I could say here, but it would be very long. I'll echo what a few others said. Read really good, industry published writing. A lot of it. Even if you are bored or don't "like" it. Reading the classics can be good, but also focusing on writers that writers read. For second...
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    SSSC II

    I know that feel. For your sake, I will do my best to not write a derivative of The Tempest. (^__^)
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