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https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1549892/the-legend-of--heavens/ That reminds me: burn this too

Ditto. The only thing that comes to mind right now is Genshin Impact, and I'm only keeping up with that game out of loyalty. My main gripe with it now (besides the EN VA drama) is the predictability and repetitiveness of their plots.

Inconvenient, but hats off to the hustle

Huh, maybe this thing isn't that reliable then

Booyah. BTW this was an emotional scene, the most likely to be written by AI. Man, I'm good~

What kind of universe has never heard of pizza!?!?

I disagree with the Madmcgee. Having the dialogue be a bit cringy fits in this scenario. This second revision to your third revision is a step in the right direction. However, I still highly recommend re-examining your premise. Even though your story seems very popular, it isn't unique in any...

So, in addition to reading your revised chapter 1, I took the time to skim other parts of your story and read the reviews of other readers. It's been a while since I've done one of these critiques, but here I go: Let's get all the bad out first. The first review you received and the last review...

In English, please?

I know what a droideka is, and aside from a modified one from the comics, they don't talk, so it'd make for a pretty boring character. However isn't this a contradiction? A threatening mook would have special qualities and a powerful mook would be threatening. Not all of us can be Captain...

I disagree with the guys above. I thought the Chitauri were a very intimidating enemy force in the context of their universe, same thing with the Fire Nation. Even if they were featured as individuals, they would be a threat, not a comic relief character. The other two are from franchises I know...

Well, it has a Nikke in it

Some of my best concepts were written while dropping the kids off at the pool. It's a great place to think.

NB: That doesn't work for mobile users (I'm on mobile rn)

Technically, you just did. The forums are a great place to start. If your story is any good, I'll give it a read Also, I'm no expert, but the big-name WNs floating around have contracts that allow them to use bots to inflate views and likes. Unless you plan to release 20 chapters a week, it's...

I never have but probably will. I'm stepping back from writing after writing over 31000 words in a month. If you join, we can be on the same team.

Well, at least we know you still got it

Every time it's someone's birthday, I'll send this. And yes, a premise is only the start when it comes to writing. The execution is way more important in the end.

As in so ridiculously unbelievable that it's funny? Yeah, I guess so. But it got taken down, so idk

Still doesn't change the fact that the guy who posted the text on SH should ask his/her/their doctor about Rexulti.