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Also, I think softer, more refined descriptors would help. Something you wouldn't hear from a typical thirsty guy who thinks with his cough.

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Explain the words anyway. If they aren't everyday words, explain them. It's better for the audience to already know what the word means than to not know and be forced to google it. And if you yourself have to google an out-of-the-way word, that's usually a good sign that a fair number of readers...

If it's fun for you, sure.

Here's a line from my book: "The three girls sat in the inn room: Kiyomi and Sako each sat backwards on a chair, feet apart around the chairbacks with hands resting on top." Hope that helps.

High school, psychotic, yandere girl does unspeakable things to her schoolmates.

Imagine having to wait for your cookies to finish baking in the oven. Man, that would suck. :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie:

Nah, I'm feeling preeeeeeeetty chill right now. :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie:

Harem for real.

Have cookie :blob_cookie:

Ez. Over 9000.

Saaaaaaaame.

eat some cookies and everything will be fine :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie: :blob_cookie:

Cliffhangerrrrrrrrrrrrrs!

Yeah, what this guy said.

Well, you could just google "bad anime". I did that, and I've found 2 websites: this one and this one. They are so "bad" that I've never heard of any of them. ...Unless you want popular ones that the reader may be able to relate to?

I'm from Canada, and I like maple syrup on pancakes. :blob_cookie:

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Woof.