Help with Sitting Position's description!

Novel_Fam

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I'm currently struggling with the position of the characters take.
I'm doing a fanfic on AO3 and don't want to publish the current draft I got ready because of this sentence...
"---- ------ edgley backward chair-sits, waving his arms down. He started smirking in the teenager’s direction, watching him struggle from the binds restricting him from freeing himself."
I circled how the character is sitting but reading the sentence again, it just doesn't seem right to me.
Please help! I will be very grateful for the one who will fix up this line, I really can't seem to think in what way should I fix this.
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Nexus_English

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Here's a line from my book: "The three girls sat in the inn room: Kiyomi and Sako each sat backwards on a chair, feet apart around the chairbacks with hands resting on top."

Hope that helps.
 

DemonOppai

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He stared at the seated teenager struggling to take his binds off. He was enjoying his discomfort and proceeded to straddle a chair facing him.

‘Just need a popcorn for this.’ He couldn’t help but chuckle.
 
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