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Hi all, I’ve started to wonder if my synopsis fits my story well enough. I know it would require at least skimmed few chapters so it’s a big ask but if anyone’s willing to give feedback on it I’d really appreciate it. Thank you,

I can definitely see that being a concern

Wow that is odd! Funny, I have some traction here but zip on RR ?‍♂️

I liked your synopsis. Pretty good. Although, as the other poster said the AI presence was strong. I've got nothing against that mind you, so long as it reads smooth, but there are those that won't read it due to that so you'll be putting yourself at a disadvantage off the bat. Buuuuut... I see...

Those are amazing! You’re really good at drawing!

Thank you so much for giving g it a read and your kind words! Sounds like you really got the satirical aspects I tried to set up! ? No I haven’t heard of perfect but thanks for linking it. I’ll have to take a look!

I wouldn’t mind some feedback on either of these. This is more of a smut one, but it has what I think to be a delightfully intriguing plot line. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1543202-cameron-to-candy/chapter/1543211/ Or set in the same universe a neurodivergent girls journey through...

Great break down… though feels like a rather short commute to not read 5000 words, but then my commute may be longer than some.

I could use some feedback on one of my stories. It's ongoing in a larger collection of short stories. Maybe I should have made it separate. Starts on the first link here then continues to the next link. I break them up a bit for timeline reasons, but I'm still working that out. If that makes it...

17 chapters of prologue? I though prologue was usually one small chapter like bit?

Sorry, not feedback to me but if I may ask, so?

Thanks! I’ll keep that in mind

Thanks, I had wondered if it was me, but it was so often I had to wonder if it was somehow the cite...

Microsoft edge, its a new HP, not sure the OS off the top of my head, I'll have to check. Seems to happen on my phone too though I think.

In this chapter, Marcus struggles with red ink in his accounts despite Candy’s (his gender flipped best freind turn forced marraige wife) claw-back of Ministry fines. He rides his mare Hearthwind into town for a land-deal meeting with a wealthy but sexist noble, Lord Trevane. As he rides out of...

I'm not sure if this belongs here, but maybe under tips? I find that when I'm writing on ScribbleHub the cursor jumps around. Like I'll be on one paragraph, move my mouse down, click, and then when I start writing, it jumps to a different section. Does anyone else have this happen here?

Interesting. I don't think I know that one. "The protagonist's third cousin, twice removed" Have to say, hilarious tag. love it

What's LLM?

I tried opening it but appearently the aliens took it?

"ijust " I'd fix this. But concerning the content, eh, why does a priestess need to make a name for herself? Why is she questing if she has no real skills? Sorry, it leaves me wanting more info, not in the sense of wanting to read the story but in the sense of why should I care, really? I don't...