Genuine Honest Feedback

[Kevin_Sullivan]

Seeking Beta Readers & Feedback!
Hi! I’m looking for readers who enjoy fantasy with romance, intrigue, and a touch of adventure. I’d love honest critiques on pacing, characters, worldbuilding, or anything that stands out. If you like immersive stories and don’t mind sharing your thoughts, I’d be thrilled to have you follow along!

The Silent Ember

On this site I have less posted but on other platforms there is longer versions.
Honest feedback very much welcome!

 

[Natsummer]

After just five seconds reading chapter 1... the very first lines. I immediately knew it is written by LLM/GPT. And I thought, it is okay. I still gave it a chance. And unsurprisingly, it was nothing but disappointment. You lost credibility as a writer. It raises concern about originality and seriousness.

Then, I checked with tools... 81.55% was the result. Yea, figured.
Please take a moment to reevaluate what it means to write and what you want from readers...

 

[LIKAAM]

After just five seconds reading chapter 1... the very first lines. I immediately knew it is written by LLM/GPT. And I thought, it is okay. I still gave it a chance. And unsurprisingly, it was nothing but disappointment. You lost credibility as a writer. It raises concern about originality and seriousness.

Then, I checked with tools... 81.55% was the result. Yea, figured.
Please take a moment to reevaluate what it means to write and what you want from readers... View attachment 40844

Interesting. I used one of these tools to check one of my chapters. I got s 75% probable AI generated text. Totally human text. Funny thing was the program offered to humanize my writing! Ha! I should have done it before I edited it!! Maybe next time.

 

[DeepWater]

Interesting. I used one of these tools to check one of my chapters. I got s 75% probable AI generated text. Totally human text. Funny thing was the program offered to humanize my writing! Ha! I should have done it before I edited it!! Maybe next time.

It seems like 90% of these 'looking for readers' threads end up with someone saying, "He's using AI! Get him!"

 

[Worthy39]

It seems like 90% of these 'looking for readers' threads end up with someone saying, "He's using AI! Get him!"

Yeah, pretty much. I don't see a problem with using it as an editing tool, the real problem is when they just give AI a prompt, and let it write the story.

 

[ZannaYO]

After just five seconds reading chapter 1... the very first lines. I immediately knew it is written by LLM/GPT. And I thought, it is okay. I still gave it a chance. And unsurprisingly, it was nothing but disappointment. You lost credibility as a writer. It raises concern about originality and seriousness.

Then, I checked with tools... 81.55% was the result. Yea, figured.
Please take a moment to reevaluate what it means to write and what you want from readers... View attachment 40844

I think there are more accurate AI checkers you could use instead. I ran a few chapters of my own through this and they all came up with at least 20% detected, even with sentences that used words I made up.

 

[Humanistheart]

After just five seconds reading chapter 1... the very first lines. I immediately knew it is written by LLM/GPT. And I thought, it is okay. I still gave it a chance. And unsurprisingly, it was nothing but disappointment. You lost credibility as a writer. It raises concern about originality and seriousness.

Then, I checked with tools... 81.55% was the result. Yea, figured.
Please take a moment to reevaluate what it means to write and what you want from readers... View attachment 40844

What's LLM?

 

[Worthy39]

What's LLM?

I think it stands for Large Language Model.

 

[Natsummer]

What's LLM?

Yes, it is Large language model. I am not against the idea of using Ai tools for assistance. This work is clearly just copy and paste. This is the problem. Then OP proceed to ask for honest feedbacks. I don't think it is fair to fellow readers.

 

[Humanistheart]

I think it stands for Large Language Model.

Interesting. I don't think I know that one.

"The protagonist's third cousin, twice removed"

Have to say, hilarious tag. love it

 

[CharlesEBrown]

I think it stands for Large Language Model.

Yep - a more accurate description than "artificial intelligence" - it models "stuff" based on an expanding understanding of language.