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  1. eternalparticle

    Monsters born of the minds of humanity.

    Complex Demons Born out of human complexes, these are psychogenic manifestations that gather around a human whose psyche is dominated by a single complex. The stronger and more polarised the complex, the stronger the demon becomes. These are rare, not found easily because they are parasitic and...
  2. eternalparticle

    Waking up at 1 am like a nocturnal :blob_ghost:

    Waking up at 1 am like a nocturnal :blob_ghost:
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Boop? :blob_evil_two:
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Boop Boop :meowsip:
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Booooooop :blob_hmph:
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Boop~ :blob_neutral:
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    Boop :blob_reach:
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    :blob_hide:
  9. eternalparticle

    Is it AI?

    Leaning towards human written. But let's be honest, anyone who knows the obvious flaws ai makes, can make changes to make it not look ai (or prompt it to make changes) i.e manual humanification. So you can only realistically tell if something is Ai if it is the first prompt generated copy-paste.
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    On first glance it does look really uncomfortable, and I myself probably would not want to sit...

    On first glance it does look really uncomfortable, and I myself probably would not want to sit on it, but it has some symbolic meaning. But let's be real... How do you sit on the thrones? Well short answer, you can probably without hurting yourself as long as you don't lean back and get...
  11. eternalparticle

    Concept Idea- Paradoxic Love

    Concept- Paradoxic Love Genre- Psychological Romantic Horror, Sci-fi An idea where romance and horror coexist because the bond itself is impossible to fully perceive or narrate. **Can be male pov or female pov depending on the author or even TPP. "The act of loving destructs the concept of...
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    Maybe I should have used Feedback early :(

    Alright this helps, I'll go through the video. Also about the using the narrator, I realized I might have phrased that dummy sentence a little wrong, what I really meant by using the narrator was to using the narrator to tease a potential follow up, as the narration is in third person bird...
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    Maybe I should have used Feedback early :(

    I see, thank you! I do have a few questions if you would. 1. How do I balance show and tell. When it's about an object, a person or a place I can show it and back the scene with my telling but how do I show concepts without having the protagonist always think his ideas, or speak it out loud...
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    Maybe I should have used Feedback early :(

    Book: Tale of the Tacticians So while most people would use the feedback when they've recently started uploading chapters, I am not most people, and so I ask for your help after I have 28 chapters up. I recently realized a problem. When I was writing the initial chapters, I knew they were very...
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