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For me first person is easier to flesh out my characters, better get across their actions, and explain their emotions. I also don’t know how to write in third person omniscience. So… that could be another reason why I heavily rely on first person. It’s just more comfortable to me and better...

You have a good point, that limit does exist to be broken, so the user can lengthen its usage. You’re right on the last paragraph but I generally expected people to have their own limits in mind. Usually that’s always a thing outside of stories and in them (in my case ofc). You’re the first one...

You got me jumping like boomshakalaka boomshakalaka

The chapter itself isn’t inherently bad per se but it’s confusing. There’s no background, no acknowledgement of who the voice is, besides giving its name, Melanie. I only read the first chapter as you asked and briefly looked over the second chapter but they again were confusing. The only place...

I can see why you’d think that insisting on an ability having limits is lame but that’s what makes it fun. An ability with limits makes it so there’s more room for creativity and flexibility. Like say you had the ability to conjure fire but your limit would be you can only conjure so much...

I feel like with how op this ability is, it would have to have a downside like that dude from mha who loses some of his sense when he phases through stuff. Or another downside would be like a cool off between uses, just so it’s evened out. Would that be the only use of this ability tho? With the...

How does it work? Is it like tickling somebody’s balls with the wave of a finger orrr?

Writing a story that super powers are a vital thing in and I have one question (or multiple). If you could have one super power what would it be? How would it work? What would you use it for? Two super powers I always adored was clairvoyance and telekinesis. Being able to hard kick my 6 senses...

I thought it was just me. I’m still trying to give other stories a chance but damn is it hard to get past due to the grammar. I also don’t wanna come off as rude if I offer some advice so usually I just click off the story and keep it moving.

For sure and my bad ima little late. I will probably read up on some Webnovels and such to help me. ;)

I’m sorry but I only read the first chapter and skimmed thought the second. 1. Right off the bat there was barely any room for introduction on your characters or any sort of prior dialogue. You just instantly jumped into a new world, with no context beforehand. I suggest probably making a...

That’s usually what I’ve been going with. Using her families members POV to better drive any points I want to make known. I did make a chap in the very beginning of my story dedicated to the little info she was able to pick up from the people around her.

Felt like the title was mad familiar and it was, I have it in my “anime’s to watch” list. Since it’s confronted me again I might as well stop making excuses and watch it already. ;)

Is it an anime, manga, or a story on sh? Sounds extremely tame for the average isekai story.

Something along, “the villainess wants to die” or “kill the villainess”. I’ve consumed WAY tm of those types of stories so I usually get the titles mixed up. It’s either of those If what ur talking about I think I know it. This dudes able to have his phone in the world. But generally that anime...

I think it’s just because most people do fantasize about leaving their home behind on earth and going to another world which is mainly fictional (I happen to be one of them lol). You also to consider if the people in the story are a common consumer of the Isekai genre. If they are it’s almost...

When and where is the best place to add details about the world? My character is a baby and she barely gets information about the world because she’s..a baby. Would it be best to just write it from other characters POV’s, wait til the MC gets older, or add like a chapter dedicated to the world...

You know what, I did mention something in my earlier chapters when I did an info dump about a particular group being enslaved. My best bet probably is to expand on that in the future when the MC first comes face to face with a member of that group. She’ll be given more information on why they...

You could continue the story as it is and perhaps have someone around him.. die? This will push for his development and maybe have him awaken some memories due to something traumatizing like that? A slow start is not horrible as long as it’s prefaced to the readers and if it’s done right. I...