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Goodnight sweet angel

See ya last commenters. And I'm winning-nya. I'm not going to come back so therefore even if you comment I'm winning

On the cover, the top text is a bit blurry. That’s all I’m going to point out, as it is a little appealing. And the synopsis is… well, okay. But there’s one thing I’m turned off by. Why would you add this, specifically the TBA ones? Anyway, moving on to the first chapter… And you already...

It keeps increasing... Okay, I'm going to do all there is now, and that's the end-nya.

What are talking about? Everyone is the same Person.

Ah. It won't end. When I finish writing one review, I think I can finally go and then there's another one-nya

I'll skip the cover and synopsis, and don't get me wrong, the synopsis is half decent, I’ll give you that, but most of it could be trimmed, or rather, it’s not really appealing to me that much. Like, there are thousands of other stories like this: an overpowered protagonist in a world full of...

The first thing I notice is that you have 53 chapters and yet somehow have no readers, which I suppose explains itself. The cover is hand-drawn; that is always good to see, but that’s not going to cut it if you want to gain any traction, which I don’t think you are with the synopsis you have...

... There was no need for this. Also a few grammatical mistakes. Alright, the cover is enough to catch a glance, and maybe a click, but that's it. Moving on to synopsis: What.... Is this.. Well I'm gonna give you benefit of the doubt, and say you used it for grammar fix. And I Dropped it at...

I'm going to be completely honest here-nya. First of all, as a reader, I wouldn't read this story. In fact, I wouldn't even click on it based on the cover and title alone. It would just go past me as another story in the sea of stories. Now, if I do actually read it, the synopsis alone doesn't...

Can you guys like let me die in peace-nya