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    Are there any stories with getting characters through gacha?

    That could be a fun way to catch readers, by grabbing famous characters like fanfics do, maybe even crossover them into unexpected relationships. Gacha wise, I have yet to see a non-overpowered MC story. Like the example already provided. This theme has a lot of potential, similarly to isekai...
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    Writing From NPC to MC?

    That could be a subtle way to write a villain. ?
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    Failure to identify with the main character?

    Even if I sound mean, the story had enough potential to reach where it reached, even without all these girls popping. It would be like solo leveling on the survival part, but better, since the concept was simply cooler. Solo leveling I read the Manga before anime being a thing and sincerely, it...
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    Failure to identify with the main character?

    Personally, enjoyed the story concept, and completely ignored the romance part. I wanted the author to show more about the leveling up, the struggle, the dangerous dying, rather than the timeskip he did. But well, things are rarely the way we want them to be. ♡
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    What's your reason for not reviewing a novel?

    People cannot tolerate the truth, therefore one cannot review another as it'll most of the time be less than 5 stars, thus crushing their ego.
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    Lively Dialogues

    Something you may want to try is to write a chapter and when dialogue arrives, you put yourself in the character shoes and think what would he say, why would he say this? Then do this for the other characters and slowly you'll gain a distinct sense on how to write dialogue. Hope that helps ☆
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    You know what I hate?

    May be the reason people put chapter titles rather than numbers in some stories
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    Spooky

    Probably just wanted to scare people.
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    Looking for Feedback

    The first chapter was really exciting to read. It built a lot of tension and mystery, remarkable. The second, however, killed everything you built. Perhaps, if you had a few more chapters slowly unraveling the mystery, adding character x, and then y, etc. Opening up to the world and allowing...
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    Is it true that some authors spend time describing a character eating breakfast or the texture of toast?

    As new writers read more and more their brain will automatically seek greatness. That's when they try things like Tolkien and realize 90% of what they read before was 'trash'.
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    Draft Synopsised Summary Attempt #1

    Write the story. It's good
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    Smut!

    Thought there was plenty of GL
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    What’s fun when ‘Reincarnated as a Monster’?

    I've read all of them and I find them more interesting than slime anime. Rimuru was interesting on the first chapters, grabbing skills and actually being monster phase. After becoming human like, the story becomes a lot less shiny—socially boring even. Not to forget becoming op too fast which is...
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    Draft Power Ranger Story

    Honestly, I'd read it. I don't see it much as a magical girl kind of classic thing but very good plot as a typical fantasy isekai start. Considering he's going to have a chance to redo one of his regrets makes me question if he can still kill her again, or if this promise binds him otherwise...
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    Smut!

    What's the most wicked smut ideas you can come up with? (Might use it/can be any genre)
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    What genres of music do you listen to while writing/reading?

    Over and over is too damnn good!!!
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    Please assist/ rate my leveling system

    I'd subtract the parameters each time the player went on a higher tier job making job change a bit more meaningful and reliant on the character true desire.
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    Looking for narrator(s)

    I'm not the best person to judge either something is disturbing or not, because to me fiction is fiction, art is art. A lot of people that are sensitive, therefore, unable to separate both realms. My favorite voice for narrator is the one in soul reaver
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