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  1. Esden-Noir

    Is 5k words too much for the first chapter?

    Ayoo pause🫣
  2. Esden-Noir

    Is 5k words too much for the first chapter?

    I agree with this one, and true my ideology is the same. Hence the chapters length in the first place🫡
  3. Esden-Noir

    Is 5k words too much for the first chapter?

    Well you were straight to the point😂 I see. Well I'm in the clear then, from chapter 2 the story becomes shorter chapters
  4. Esden-Noir

    Is 5k words too much for the first chapter?

    I agree, if it hasn't been done... Well it actually was very famous back in the day to have a long first chapter so I guess it'll work out True. But I'd say, an epilogue or Prologue isn't necessary if the first chapter does it's job of explaining without breaking immersion Well I might fall...
  5. Esden-Noir

    Is 5k words too much for the first chapter?

    Thank you for your input. But what about you? Would you read a chapter that long if presented?
  6. Esden-Noir

    Is 5k words too much for the first chapter?

    So basically, I'm planning on releasing a new novel which I've been writing recently. (it's named iterate and I've linked the poster below) but my question here is. The first chapter turned out to be 6,788words long. I've tried trimming it or shortening it some aspects, which made it Haruka’s...
  7. Esden-Noir

    Wanna read a dark fantasy story?

    No the writing (including the poster aswell) was fully made by me Hmm that's true I'll upload a chapter everyday so let's just wait for now then
  8. Esden-Noir

    Wanna read a dark fantasy story?

    I've released my novel (again) recently after a rework I want people to actually see/read my novel. If you guys have the time please do read it. And I would greatly appreciate it if you guys gave any feedback. I mean "Any" feedback works. I've linked the story and gave the synopsis below. Here...
  9. Esden-Noir

    Assistance for a "Re-Release"

    Hmm, so the only problem is the text? Which I understand because the app I used to paste the text was on my phone. If so I should change the font—Right? Like here is the raw image should I just add diff font? Upscaling it made the eyes kind weird lol Or should I ditch it and use the second image?
  10. Esden-Noir

    Assistance for a "Re-Release"

    True enough I should write it in My the original writing style. And bro I drew the image just the shading is too bright. That's why it looks like ai/or maybe the quality here is making it weird. And I published the first 2 chaps of the novel, if you want check it out...
  11. Esden-Noir

    Assistance for a "Re-Release"

    So basically, last time I released a novel named "The World Without Mercy" I'm thinking that I've rewritten majority of the original work, I'll start releasing the novel with a full update. New cover art, new chapter, and a full rework. I've gave the new cover art under here. I'd say it captures...
  12. Esden-Noir

    Do you write multiple stories?

    It's my personal opinion, atleast writing 2 fictions at once is best. Because you won't have enough motivation/creativity to limit yourself to the bounds and world building of one story. I suggest having two stories with completely different plots or world building to actually have the...
  13. Esden-Noir

    Is this concept strong enough to capture attention?

    Remember I think of writing as a hobby and professionally. So the story will be deeper(pause) in lore ways then one
  14. Esden-Noir

    Is this concept strong enough to capture attention?

    Or steins gate life action/American spin off
  15. Esden-Noir

    Is this concept strong enough to capture attention?

    Yes ik that much, I really don't do Prologues and that snippet is the start of the novel. So if it starts with my love died. Then don't you think it should continue with that instead a mundane life. I am going for a more deeper story then just a time travel blah blah. It starts with death it...
  16. Esden-Noir

    Creepy story request

    Yes, ik it's very disturbing the kinds of things people imagine. But at a point you will realize, if he has the balls to talk about it. It just means there's worse. And personally me, I've heard something from somone who wanted something written so outrageous and revolting that I'm kinda...
  17. Esden-Noir

    Is this concept strong enough to capture attention?

    Yeah I just recently thought of the idea, so it's unpolished/unfinished. And To explain what I mean by afternoon vs afternoon. afternoon (one word): The time of day from noon (12:00 PM) to evening, usually until around 6 PM. Example: "We met in the afternoon." After noon (two words)...
  18. Esden-Noir

    Is this concept strong enough to capture attention?

    So I've been recently writing a new novel. It's about time travel a genre I adore yet never had the energy to make. But I was listening music then a came up with this idea. It's basically a time travel novel centered around the mc who can only travel back in time at a specific time.(which is...
  19. Esden-Noir

    Update vs Republish?

    I think I will release it. But this time I will take it slow. 1 Chapter a day keeps the doctor away? ? I'm not dropping it per se I'm just re-uploading it. And because I'm adding a lot of details/changes it's the best choice to re-upload.
  20. Esden-Noir

    Update vs Republish?

    Okay so basically. I've been upto some repolishing on my novel(after some Ai slop ruined it) I didn't intentionally use ai. the app I wrote in had it prebuild for spell checks and it changed phrasing so it made my novel unreadable. But now that I've started repolishing it. I've changed a bit too...
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