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What's Dark Fantasy? I doubt it's just Fantasy but in the night x)

I like the concept idea but I never stick around. Gets too confusing for an airhead x)

I thought Expedition was really fun :blob_popcorn: Oblivion Remastered was a sleeper surprise hit for me x) that scratched my little medieval fantasy itch :blob_melt: I still haven't played Kingdom Come Delivrance 2, I need to finish the first one x) But my main vote is for Expedition. It was...

Right :blob_sweat: there's no prequel, just me making mistakes while writing here. I'm planning to edit and cut some content on Act 1 to make the pacing, direction, and story easier to follow. It's kind of aimless at times, admittedly. That one bit with the poison for example will be getting...

By Act 2 of my story, several chapters reach the 3k threshold. But they have a lot going on so it's not like it's filler x) I'm going with the idea to keep the duration as long as they need to be, just not too long. Even I get shy when reading over 3k length chapters XD I see :blob_melt...

... do you not finish your stories? x)

Hmm, okay then. I've been shortening the chapter length and keeping it between 2000 and 2500 words, so that helps. That's a relief :blob_sweat: I worry about making grammatical errors and losing readers because of it. Some have been helpful and leave comments mentioning some typos...

That's a lot of notes for me to take, I greatly appreciate it! Does the chapter length or word count influence whether you continue reading or drop the story?

All of this is very good stuff, thamk you! I'm taking notes from your response :blobreading: Would the story length and word count influence your decision to drop the story or continue it? Here's your cookie, thank you! :blob_cookie:

Oh I intend to keep writing. It's just that I worry about the numbers dropping to an unrecoverable amount. It's already down by a lot :sweat_smile: and I'm at the climax of Act 2! I'm worried that there won't be any readers interested to see the conclusion of the story. Sometimes the simplest...

Valid :blobrofl: I read that in his voice

Hi everyone! Amateur writer here x) I'm working on increasing the statistics on my novel. I know it's natural for views to fall off with each new chapter, but I wanted to gather some information from you guys to help with a few things. Main question is: What makes you (the reader) decide to...

Personally I prefer the Pain vs Jiraiya battle x)

A wubba lubba dub dub

You remove the block, silly x)

Call me jelly x) this is quite a compliment to those authors. I hope someday my work earns that in the future. You've got talent Zannayo, amazing :blobthumbsup:

As someone who works in the field of Mental Health, I can totally see that :blob_sweat:

I don't have a good relationship with my mother. I don't have it in my heart to say I hate her, thought she's made it abundantly clear of her dislike for me. Still, I have a deep respect for good mothers out there, fictional and real. I hope one day I get to take that role if I find the right...

My villain has committed religious persecution, ethnic cleansing, and attempted genocide based on their beliefs, and that's still not enough compared to what they're trying to do in the current time of the story. None of this is shown in the story though. Like it's stuff that they did in the...

It's like a quasi-redemption. Realistically if he survived, he would have a lot to answer for. But his death fits for convenience of the story and is a good send off for his character arc. This is why it gets tricky when villains are redeemed AND survive the consequences of their actions with a...