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Sounds good to me! The only thing I'd change is to shorten the sentences. Turn at least two or three of the commas (especially the dreaded semicolon) into normal periods. Sentences that are too long are harder to read and understand.~ I like how your description packs a punch and isn't overly long!

I prefer "gray" but I use "grey", since I think it's more common!

The [Advisor] flew out the window.

No need to do that unless there's many people in the room (even then it can be avoided), or you're trying to slightly inflate your wordcount. Readers are pretty smart, they can figure most stuff out by themselves.

It's not bad. I've known people who have written their "bad" story (or more than one "bad" story) for millions of words over the years. But it served as excellent practice, they didn't give up, they stayed determined and pushed through. Writing and posting, day in, day out. And after all those...

No, but it makes for a strange power dynamic. You know things about them that they've said to you in the future, but don't know that they've said them to you. And if the timeskip is long enough (more than 5 or 10 years?) It gets to the point where the age gap makes things tricky and weird, too...

Yooo, my new isekai story got approved! Question for the people: how often do you think a new author should post in the start? Once or twice a day? I have 20 chapters already written so far.~

Name/Nickname: My username, Ara(ra(ra)) Hobbies/interests: In order: Reading > Gaming > Writing >Watching Anime > Programming > Work > ... > College Genres you read often/tags you often look for: Cultivation, LitRPG, I like some nice smut as well! But also anything else fantasy-ish or magic-ish...