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I may be overthinking this, but as someone who appreciates content warnings for topics/themes I'm uncomfortable with, I'd like to know if this kind of scene needs one? Condensed explanation: Scene starts out with two characters about to have sex. Person one is much less comfortable and showing...

Thank you so much for this thoughtful feedback. I really appreciate it, and I'm glad you enjoyed my story. I'm jotting down notes based off feedback I've got so far, and I plan on doing a bit of editing in the first few chapters soon. The tone thing is definitely something I could fix. When I...

Hey, I gave your first chapter a read. These are my thoughts. Mushrooms and fungi make for a cool introduction to this world. "She wonders: the place is being overrun by mushrooms, vines, and shrubs." > This sentence punctuation is a bit weird. Maybe just say "she wonders if this place is...

I've had a (traditional) novel WIP in the works for literal years, but I think because I care about it so much I keep feeling intimidated and creativity just dissipates. I'm writing at least a few hundred words a day atm, and it's because I'm just having fun with it and I don’t overthink it too...

I think I'm in a different time zone to a lot of people here...

I'd be happy to check it out, sure. But I've written feedback for four stories now, and only one person has given feedback in return. As long as you are willing to do a proper swap with effort on both ends, feel free to drop a link to your story and I will give it a read.

Well, ultimately it's your choice, but I think it will be less popular in this format.

Hey! I gave your story a read. These are my thoughts. Hope they're helpful! Okay, first off, this is written like a screenplay? Is that intentional? If so, it may be worth noting as such in your story description because if it comes as a surprise, it could alienate readers. There are a few...

Hey! I'm glad it was helpful. I think you have some really cool ideas and a story that has a lot to say. Good luck going forth! I checked out the next two chapters, here are my thoughts. CHAPTER TWO AND THREE: Nyla's POV is kind of confusing. The first paragraph of the chapter especially is...

That'd be great! Thanks! I just checked out your first chapter. I had a few thoughts, so I figured I'd post them here. I may have spent a bit too much time on just the first chapter, so I'll keep the feedback briefer for the next two, but I think the first chapter is very important for...

Up to you! Whatever you feel comfortable with. I don’t mind. I'm happy to provide general feedback on the first three chapters here, and post a short review on the reviews section of your story. Sure, I'll check it out this week. The link to my story is in the original post message. Thanks!

(Just a heads up. This is all first-thought feedback. I just finished reading the first three chapters of your story. I hope it's helpful! I'm also happy to write a review, but I'd probably want to take a bit more time to write that in a more structured way.) - - First up, the world feels big...

For sure, might be interesting to compare worldbuilding approaches. Could you share a link to your story? I'll check it out.

Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time.

Hi, if you are still offering, would you check out my story please? No pressure if you’re too swamped by now. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1686606/consorts-of-the-court/stats/ It's a historical fantasy harem story, but very slow burn. The first and second chapters are written a little...

I'm still relatively new to ScribbleHub, but it seems like people don’t often leave reviews and only sometimes leave comments. I think a good work-around could be doing feedback/review swaps? I like reading fantasy and slice of life type stories, and I appreciate expansive worldbuilding and...

Hi, not sure if you are still doing this, but if so, would you give my story a read? It's a historical fantasy harem story, but very slow burn. The first and second chapters are written a little differently because I was still establishing the tone. I know R-18 content does well here but I'm...