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  1. MakBow

    Revenge Novels

    What do you think of revenge novels? I'm writing a revenge novel currently (Two at the moment, one is posted yet) (Don't ask why) I want to know what you think is the biggest disappointment in a revenge novel. I want to make sure my revenge novel actually works for what it does. I do intend...
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    How to shift Perspective in First-person perspective novel?

    So, my novel is written in first person perspective. How exactly do you change perspectives the right way to another person? Do you just change to third person perspective, or do you stick to first person? Currently struggling with this in my novel.
  3. MakBow

    Loli Companion or MILF (or Mature-Looking) Companion?

    In my story(That I haven't posted yet), I've having my MC be with a sort of Loli I guess or more so a petite woman that is much shorter than average be his companion, also being a spirit for extra points. Do you think a Loli companion is better (like Paimon) or a much taller, MILF if that's what...
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    LitRPG and Systems

    Does anyone feel like LitRPG is severely underutilized or am I just ignorant? I feel like the system could be used in a lot for ways, but it's just opting for the same stats, general level, group stuff, and all the shenanigans. There also the fact in isekai is just...exist, no reason, it just...
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    Read-Baiting Readers

    This is something I thought about ever since I read Re: Zero: I notice that the title of the Re: Zero could come off as being the generic isekai as well as the start, but later on, quickly more so, it starts to get a lot better into peak. Do you think it's smart to bait readers into thinking...
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    Isekai: Summoned Groups

    This is something I have always been thinking about: do you think the idea of random people being summoned has a lot more potential? It's always either a class or some random people with no relevance. In my story I'm writing (not posted yet), I'm currently using his idea to do more with that...
  7. MakBow

    Prologue

    Tell me what you think about this prologue. The concept is meant to be for an isekai where the main character has extreme misfortune. (Not it isn't a comedy novel, but a revenge one.) (This does get transfer along with him in the new world) (To give you a simple idea: I'm essentially doing...
  8. MakBow

    The Weak OP MC and The Eldritch Entity (Idea For Future Novel Once I Finish The Current One)

    The MC is a weak guy with a weak body due to a curse from another world (unknown to him) because a witch knew he was the reincarnation of the Calamity King, a powerful being that destroys everything around him and in his bed, he reads a novel, talking about how he wants to be in a fantasy world...
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    Chapter Lengths

    Question 1: What is the minimal chapter count that is most preferred or/and the maximum if there is any for a reader? I notice that my chapters often have a word count of around 2000 - 3500, maybe more as I often write until I feel like it's a good time to end the chapter and I write multiple...
  10. MakBow

    My Magic System (My First Soft Magic System)

    So, I want to know if this is a good enough magic system. It's already in effect, but at the current moment in the story, I haven't really exposed the full roster and capabilities of it, so I can still technically edit it before all of it is exposed Magic System #1: Eldeblooms Mana comes from...
  11. MakBow

    Looking for feedback (My First Revenge Novel)

    I want to know if I'm doing this well for a revenge novel as I want to use trashy elements from typical revenge novels and actually make them good. I'm not trying to reinvent but rather take trash or mid fun novels (Failure Frame, Redo of Healer for example) and use their elements to make a good...
  12. MakBow

    Feedback

    Read the first following chapters and tell me what you think. It's a novel that is inspired by Redo of Healer, Failure Frame, The Wrong Way To Use Healing Magic, and other series and games. I followed, you guessed it, an actual support healer (not the 'healing' that Keyaru does) with a similar...
  13. MakBow

    Healer Inspired Hobby Novel?!!?!? (No, it's not like that.)

    In short, this is more of a hobby novel I'm posting alongside my main novel as it allows me to keep my mind fresh (for some reason), but I would still like criticism as it's more of me taking Redo of Healer, Failure Frame, Sentenced to be Hero, and The Wrong Way to Use Healing Magic as my...
  14. MakBow

    Thoughts on my Novel. am a new fairly new writer

    Can someone tell me what they think of the first chapters of my novel? Honest criticism and praise please. Link: Re:Start – To Conquer The Stars As The Evil Lord | Scribble Hub
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