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  1. MakBow

    To Those Who Write Fight Scenes...

    1. What is the hardest thing about writing a fight scene? 2. What do you do to make sure there is a good balance? (Dialogue, Action and Metaphorical Description) As someone who struggles to write good fight scenes, advice is very beneficial.
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    Feedback For my Third Person Perspective (I Feel I'm Buns At It)

    So, for the passion project of the novel, I'm trying to train my third person perspective and make it better. (I've been writing in First Person for two long) If you're willing to give feedback on both the prologue and the first chapter, I will appreciate it. You can also tell me what you...
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    What Genre Do You Enjoy Writing The Most?

    Pretty simple question really My Answer: Action, Fantasy, Isekai
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    Do people here like dungeon crawlers and tower climbers?

    It's just something I want to know as I'm writing a second novel to use as practice to train my third-person perspective since I suck at it as well as being purely for fun and to keep my mind fresh to prevent writer's block to do my more active novel. It's meant to be a dark fantasy, gory...
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    Power System For My Side(Fun & Third Person Training) Novel

    So, for my fun and training novel, this is going to be the power system which was inspired by game development (I take game development classes). I believe that this power system is simple, but it could be extremely diverse and versatile in how it could be used. What we thinking, what we...
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    Fun Novel to Train My Third Person-Perspective & Prevent Writer's Block

    So, this novel is mainly for training purposes and is meant to help me train my third person perspective because I've been writing in first person for far too long and at the current part of my novel, I'm struggling to doe third person properly. It's also there to train me on how to write dark...
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    How to put pictures in the novel?

    I don't understand the Insert/edit image? How do I add a picture from my computer?
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    Finished My First Arc/Volume Today!

    I know this is not really all that relevant to any of you really but it's at least an accomplishment on my part. I managed to finish my first ever arc and rounded it up and what I felt was a good cliffhanger to get int volume 2. Context: The entire first arc is still in the 'dungeon' that my...
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    What does it feel like when writing?

    Can you tell me what's going through your head when you are writing your novels? When I write mine, the image of everything just plays in my head, like I'm watching an anime with peak animation quality and voice acting. I edit and fine tune everything after. What's it like for you?
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    Chapter Posting Schedules (Advice)

    What do you think is a good number of chapters a week is? I currently have 20 chapters written, 10 not posted at the moment so I'm 10 chapters ahead since I write a lot while listening to ezgeeky read LOTM. What do you think is a good number of chapters to release a week without burning...
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    Have you conditioned yourself in writing?

    Tell me if y'all groomed conditioned yourselves in writing. (yes, I know the word is rather infamous for its other uses, but it's not only for THAT) I physically cannot post a chapter unless its 2000 words, MINIMUM, all because when I first started writing (Started on Web novel) and wrote my...
  12. MakBow

    Story Feedback

    I request feedback for the novel. Just tell me what you think and if you think it's enjoyable and has potential Cursed Hand: With Simple Curses, I Annihilated Everything | Scribble Hub
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    First Person to Third Person to Signify Change

    So currently in my chapter (not posted yet), I'm taking a huge gamble, but I think it could work. Basically, the situation: Hugging each other, I jumped down the pit. When I did, everything was spinning. Not in a way that suggested motion, but confusion, like gravity itself had forgotten the...
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    To Mystery Authors...

    How hard is it to write a mystery novel without it feeling cheap? I have no intention of writing a mystery novel as I couldn't for the life of me, but I do want to know what it's like for those on the other end, especially since I read LOTM (Stuff frying my brain with all the buildup...
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    Fantasy Vs Sci-fi

    What are your thoughts on Fantasy vs Sci-fi? Not in the sense of which is better, but rather, a story of where both of these elements are present. Like I have an idea in the back of my head that I intend to keep pocketed until I finish my novel where in a war, on a Dark Fantasy (Grounded...
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    Feedback For Amateur Writer

    Even though I have written quite a lot of incomplete novels (I intend to actually finish this one for real) across various platform, I'm still pretty much an amateur when it comes to writing. I forced myself to think I could write some deep, complicated novel, so I decided for this year to...
  17. MakBow

    My Power System(s)

    [Power System #1: Staitus System] (Restricted only to the Summoned Humans in my Novel) The ‘Staitus System’ (Status System) is a system modeled after the game stats of games, created by the goddess, formed by the enslaved spirits the goddess possessed, meant to measure the capabilities (Stats)...
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    Villian Origin Story Novels

    I notice that I've never really seen a villain origin story novel unless I just suck at exploration. I know there are things like Overlord, where the MC transmigrated into the villain role and they adapt to that role, but I've never seen an actual MC start off decent, neutral, or good but...
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    Character Descriptions (How to Do It Properly?) (Ignore)

    I have no actual understanding of how to do a character description to their look, and I feel as if I'm either under-doing it or overdoing it. Example of Mine She was quite a strange creature, giving me the view of a gremlin. White skin with hair as octopus tentacles, starting as...
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    Synopsis

    Synopsis Kuroha Kuroyami, commonly called Kuro, a young man who had always lived a life of misfortune, would be summoned by the Goddess Shumato, along with three other people to serve as heroes for the world in a fight against the demons. While the other three would be gifted with exception...
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