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  1. HelloHound

    Tag for what is, or for what will be

    if you're intending on writing a romance but you're starting from the POV of a snot-nosed kid not interested in others do you still tag it even if you're at 40 chapters and no significant other?
  2. HelloHound

    Best Way to Die

    fight a bear; it would show a lot about your mc and their character and be a fun little story for them to tell ex. five-year-old princess in a pretty pink dress: I once choked the life out of a behemoth, why should I fear this 'slumber party'? The only slumber one needs to fear is the eternal...
  3. HelloHound

    Commenters Missing the Point?

    I guess the audience has a short line for patience and think your mc has a hole in the brain
  4. HelloHound

    Feeling sad rn

    the internet is a vast space; maybe they wanted for a new space? hopefully they're doing alright
  5. HelloHound

    How many comments have you made?

    How many actual comments that are about a story, chapter, or characters do you think you've made?
  6. HelloHound

    Classes for LitRPG?

    Factory worker: exp gain on repetitive actions +CHR among fellow workers -AGI in front of bosses (monsters included) "Old, reliable, and monotonous since the start of the industrial revolution! Sure you may want to melt your eyes out around hour four of folding paper but look at all you gain...
  7. HelloHound

    Do I write too much?

    personally can't relate (avg 930 words per chapter) but I guess it's too much when it detracts or distracts from the story or when you feel it's too much. after all, you're the first reader of your work
  8. HelloHound

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Thank you for the feedback and it does (very slowly) gain an overarching plot but I guess in terms of plot right now it's probably a weird slice-of-life? I mostly started writing because a. unfortunately I came up with a very specific scenario that I would probably not find a lot of and b. I...
  9. HelloHound

    NEED IDEAS OF CREATIVE WAYS TO USE MAGIC

    all the magic comes out the mouth
  10. HelloHound

    Can I get more questions in polls?

    I really enjoy asking questions and would like to be able to get more specific with certain topics or ask for different polls without having to make a separate post (Also hi hope your day's working out alright)
  11. HelloHound

    Monster girls in harems

    want but you can talk about your idealized monster girl self-insert if you want to; wouldn't be the first time that a forum has gone sideways
  12. HelloHound

    Monster girls in harems

    I'm doing a thing in a place and to do that I am here to ask you lovely folks for the types of gals that you've seen in harem manga/novels; like all my other polls this isn't exhaustive so if you want to talk about your obscure waifu
  13. HelloHound

    Chapter specific reviews/scores

    barely anyone bothers to even like chapters, much less comment so I think a per-chapter review system would largely be unused
  14. HelloHound

    Free First Chapter Feedback

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/501740/for-want-of-a-house/ (admittedly it's an acquired taste)
  15. HelloHound

    Plot devices in stories that causes one to frown?

    memory loss and overuse of tsundere tactics
  16. HelloHound

    Writing Prompt Describe how a character is feeling through their narration on the environment.

    " Sure, it might have been Gwen's fault that the table caught fire but honestly who actually uses the decorative candles? That little twerp Irwin apparently; right up until the point where his joker-emblazed lighter left his shirt pocket, all that was going to happen was a little zest to...
  17. HelloHound

    Favourite hybrid species in fantasy stories

    I've a soft spot for satyrs
  18. HelloHound

    Chinese literature: Hair Chewing/biting

    it's like a sign of frustration or madness that someone with long hair is so preoccupied with something that they ignore the fact that they are tasting their own hair. there's a similar version where they're biting their thumb/fingers until they draw blood
  19. HelloHound

    what should be counted in the reader section

    I don't mind that there's a dropped section, I just wish it didn't count among the whole of the readers and if someone were to drop the story then the number of readers counted would also drop
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