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    A proper cutaway

    I had someone tell my story had a movie esque cutaway where the next section had two paragraphs before a new cutaway transition to the next 'scene'. It was a bad thing for them, what I want to know is how you would write a proper cutaway.
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    I enjoy the legend of heroes series

    Finished main story of Trails to Reverie. Waiting for Kuro no Kiseki to come to the states. Played the others prior to this. Trails in the sky 1,2, and part of 3. The Crossbell arc and trails of cold steel.
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    Your protagonist becomes your distant relative.

    The protagonist from your story is transported to your world and somehow becomes your distant relative. What do they do? What do you do? What happens to the family dynamic. Everyone else seems to think they always been there, but you know better. How do they change the world? Also whatever...
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    Sometimes I want a reader to tell me why they dropped a story.

    When you post a new chapter and all of a sudden one or two people drop due to the contents of that chapter. And that some readers have reading list sections with different titles. They have a dropped section and another section that says 'toxic' or 'yikes' or something. Makes one wonder what...
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    Do you have to acknowledge current events in your story?

    Like acknowledge political figures and events. Me, my story, if I acknowledge it, is like JFK was never assassinated, so a chain of events lead to different people being in different positions in authority. Basically I will have a fictional leader.
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    What do you all think of my synopsis?

    I am 18 chapters in... but I want your critique of the summary. "Chaotic forces have emerged and warriors of the elements are needed. A teenage boy becomes the next warrior of fire in order to not only fight against the agents of chaos, but to protect those close to him. Fighting villains and...
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    Do you intentionally skip chapters?

    Reading online fiction, books, or manga? I know many can tell when someone skips a chapter in a story based on views. If so... WHY?
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    Trope: Your new power is altering your DNA

    Character gets power. Some chapters/episodes in, its revealed their power is either harming them or slowly makes them into capybara hybrid.
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    My Character art for my story.

    Here is a link to my devianart page. Has some of the characters I drew using Clip Studio Paint https://www.deviantart.com/blitzsonic62/gallery/87751173/power-of-the-elements
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    What would you consider gore

    Mention getting a cut and have blood trickle out or a detailed description of a chest bursting out. I want to put in the gore tag just in case.
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    How would you write a noble class.

    Basically not to be outright evil like the World Nobles in One Piece nor to be super good. Somewhat in the middle. Like business relationship with the commoners. Say the King or Emperor will remove their status if they go out of line.
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    Dropped List question.

    I think when someone put my story on their dropped list, my message of thanking them for 'reading' on their profile was also deleted. Does that happen automatically?
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    Writing Romance

    When the characters continue to grow on each other to the point they admit their feelings. Would you have one of them say they love that person after the build up or ask them to go on date while say they like them in a big way?
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