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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    Oh, my SWEET ROLLS! I'll be shameless then... Don't read chapter 0(zero), yes, it's my prologue... It has magic, a statue, and a serious tone. It's in my signature, thanks. If you think it's good, I would love a positive review of the novel itself, like a 5-star or 4? Yeah, that was shameless...
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    I offer free feedback. (Closed)

    Sweet! I have relatively short chapters. It has magic, a statue, and a serious tone. It's in my signature, thanks.
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    I’m questioning if there’s a light novel like this.

    A gender bender harem, that's quirky. In a nice way of course.
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    Bad writers block. I need help!

    Introduce a deus ex machina? I am not sure, but it has its advantages. This would easily circumvent your problem, and It may be abrupt, but this can also serve as a way to expand your story in the next arc or something. Like say, you need to seek approval from the owner of the ancient city. It...
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    The smartest protagonist of any book, movie, anime, cartoon and song is Light Yagami from death note, change my mind

    The OG of course. I mean, he's almost psychic. If not the OG, maybe the BBC version because that is when the memory palace was first introduced. I want to say the Robert Downey Jr. version, but in terms of aesthetic, the guy is quite far from the SH I know in terms of appearance. He's a good...
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    What is your favorite apocalypse?

    I read something similar but I can't stomach the freaking CN package that comes with it.
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    What is your favorite apocalypse?

    Not in a realistic sense, cuz no one really wants the end of the world, right? Especially for sane humans who want to continue their super boring life. Apparently, I am not sane... Hmmm... I don't really know, I am not sure... I guess fantasizing about zombie apocalypses is harmful to my...
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    The smartest protagonist of any book, movie, anime, cartoon and song is Light Yagami from death note, change my mind

    My Top Picks, that Light Yagami would hardly outsmart. 1. Sherlock Holmes (It's obvious, right? Tell me if you don't think SH deserves the top. 2. Ayanokouji kiyotaka (He's the wolf among the sheep, he is a manipulative badass that hides among the smartest people in the world) 3. Lelouch...
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    Most accurate portrayal of a smart character I've ever seen.

    Socrates said, "True knowledge exists knowing that you know nothing..." So, guys, I am just saying... Your IQ doesn't define how much smart you are, or how stupid you are. If you are intelligent or not depends on how others see you. So, just chill, don't succumb to your pessimism. Take your...
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    MATHIC teacher. Pay your respects to [IMG]

    MATHIC teacher. Pay your respects to
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    I’ll rate your waifu

    A villain/heroine in my story
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    Why can’t I read my own novel?!

    I don't know. I write a chapter, then read it. If it's good, then it's good. if I feel something is off, I edit it. Every time I write a new chapter, I reread my prior chapters. It's a hassle, but it works just fine for me. While at it, I am gaining constant improvement, so it's not that bad.
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    Hello fellow human

    Hello fellow human
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    Do you sometimes think "this chapter would be easy" but then thing happened?

    I sympathize... It can also happen after every odd chapters, well, atleast to me! You write chapter 1, aaaah... Then you realize you have too much infodump, so you rewrite it. You write chapter 2 quite easily cuz Chapter 1 already guided you. You write chapter 3, aaaah... It doesn't make sense...
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    Does suffering build character?

    I totally agree, that's why I make my readers suffer. They should thank me.
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    Does chapter size matter?

    I did a 500 word per chapter, and you can imagine just how irritating it can get... Most often, my stamina can't keep up with my thoughts and schedule, so I'm stucked at 500 words per chapter. It's not just irritating to my readers, it's also very irritating to me. Though initially, I opted...
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    Do you find anime idol anime music cringe/strange? Do you like them?

    Yeah, I feel them cringe and strange. Specifically, the animation. But the music? It sounds good just right to me... My reason for this strange feeling is because of the Karaoke JP animation that most often appears on the screen... That poses and bouncy acrobatics and cringe choreography are...
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    Released a new chapter an got 30k views.

    Congrats, that's awesome. I am also writing at chap 30, but I only got 2000+. My grammar is good, and the story, have its charms. Care to share your tricks?
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    The difference between qi/ chi/ ki and stamina

    Qi is the denomination or specification of what kind of energy flows in you, this is according to my observation on numerous CN novels I read. Simply put, it is energy you cultivate, plain and simple. Meanwhile, Ki appeals mostly to an individual's senses like Black Clover's example. Asta and...
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    Just curious. Stereotypes/Archetypes of directional regions and four gods (holy beasts)?

    I remember now, there is an eagle that is pure western. It's Hraesvelgr, a legendary bird from Norse mythology that perches on the top of Yggdrasil. I completely forgot it, since Hraesvelgr appeared as a dragon in Final Fantasy. Hraesvelgr is a jotun who appears in the form of an eagle. In terms...
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