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The clarity is good. The hooks? not so much. Like the posts before me said, need more punchier. Similar premises like others? yes, but you can still make it more stand out

"Engagement" definitely. What makes the story engaging? Either the plot/stakes, the characters, the worldbuilding, the dialogues, the prose, the cliffhanger. Well, its much better if all of those are present

samesies, but in my case that storm is over after i rewrite my first 30 chapters. TWICE Ma'am, you just became my favorite internet person *take off my hat

Why... this bull is being kind instead of being... a bull? *carefully approach him to give a pat Ooff this if fun, but i gtg and cook for my son (nope, still cant afford to make him organic food everytime) Toodle doo~

*slowly and stealthily steps back to the exit

What a coincidence, a week ago i got 2.5 star review on RR. He praise my story but curse my AI pics (he literally wrote the classic–pay for artist or make your own–line), hence the 2.5 star. But yesterday, somehow he deleted that review after what i assume he reads way more chapters. (bitch...

Aaah, yess, thank you for the reasoning and clarification, dear good sir. But question is do you think other readers would want to hear this? or they will simply stop reading? But still, carry on and keep writing, you are better than other authors who got stuck after writing 1 chapter and act...

Did i... just being judged as one of those edgy edgelord peeps? Shit, that's low

Well that's the link you had on your signature! Edit: Aaaah, the book is in that tiny icon thingy... Ok, maybe later or tomorrow

That's it, i've decided! I will kill a lot of characters for tomorrow chapter release. Muha.. Muhaha... Muhahahaha!

*clearing throat* Welcome to scribble hub my fellow orckin