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Got it. Gonna review it soon. Expect answers in about... 3 hours or so. Idk.

Alright... So, I am on my last straw here. At the same time, I also feel a little giddy and full of tomfoolery. Should I be patient towards the anime pfp guy, or should I unleash at him?

What did I said about going into this thread??? Are you blind or something? Hey, I have a spare eyeglasses for you if your oh-so-righteous eyes are oblivious to the thread title. Yes, I do wear eyeglasses. And yes, I do have a spare eyeglasses for people with bad eyesight like you. And also...

Sure, sir masochist ogre. Bro, I already dissed ya

Alr, giving it a read. You expect me to read the beginning, right? Okay.

The one on your signature?

Yes, and fucking no. Will do, pal. Color besides the object. C+O. A singular drop of dark blood. Fix the wording. Present tense to describe third-person groups/individuals doing something in the present time. 'Meanwhile, a group of masked militants takes out rifles from a duffel bag stained...

Might need some polishing on the grammar. Reading your chaps while trying to imagine the scene playing in my mind is a difficult task when the scene is presented like this. I give it a 5.5/10. I'd bite the fic, if it has better grammar. There are many expositions that I think is okay-ish...

I think he's just not figuring out how to do so, yet. It's more like someone so green and tries to write a fic for the first time.

Yes I am, Now, wait. @SenseiHusky Are you telling me to read this not in google doc's form? Hope you write more, cuz I'd like to learn the world, even if my mood doesn't supports me. WHAT THE FUCK???? You know what, fuck you. Fuck you in particular. You don't just say 'the scene cuts to'...

Alr, let's see... Holy f*ck. That's a prologue?! nevermind @ElijahRyne This is kind of a fun read, I guess. Though, the wordings kinda threw me off, because I am not a native of english. But yeah, I can see myself reading this in my free time, interested to see what's gonna happen to Lenn...

I DIDNT I WAS EXPECTING PEOPLE TO UNDERSTAND Genuinely. No, I am serious. Gon check it out sometime soon.

Where the fuck did you even get all these melodies? And how the hell did you know I like them?

BRING IT ON! HIYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA