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First up, you made a grammar mistake with "speeded himself up." Second, generally, someone fighting with a staff isn't going for kicks, the whole point of the staff is to stay out of striking range, if he can kick you, you can probably kick him. One of two things would've happened after the...

I'm curious, for those who have willingly allowed the legend to tear apart your stories... what goes through your head? My ego is way too fragile for this, but I'm curious what you're thinking when you come here for a roast. Are you hoping for some level of constructive criticism mixed in there...

Well, it's primarily a fantasy, not a romance, and also that character doesn't get introduced until like, chapter forty, then it's even longer before they date. Plus, I'm in the middle of just rewriting the whole thing. I got a lot of praise for my character writing and action scenes, but I...

To avoid the turn based combat thing, combination attacks and counters exist, just use them wisely. Also, so long as it's not "He punched, but he missed. Then his opponent punched. And he missed." It's not that bad. Unless you're in a Kung-Fu movie, you're not usually seeing two people moving at...

For me, I haven't had a ton of romance yet, but my protagonist is dating someone, I guess. Not much to it, he's depressed, traumatized, but reliable and overall a nice person, and she's scared, and just one of those people that can make anyone feel better by being around her (if you've met...

So you just need to lose access to the internet, huh? Well, if you'll excuse me, I'm off to the pacific ocean with some wire cutters.

Why do you still resist? So long as I am here, you will never win.

Well, as long as you're not writing a story with torture, it's not a necessary skill to have.

They usually are, I just struggle to think of things that aren't repetitive. Like, maybe six different actions per chapter is about the best I can manage because I just struggle to think of things they could do in that specific situation.

No

Unless you have forty eyes.

I feel that one.

This made me laugh way more than it should've for some reason.

"She's legal in some countries!!!" -Your readers, probably.

I mean, you could always just Google a random name generator or something, I randomize names until I find one I like. Yeah, I suck at those, too. I've seen very few people who don't.

If it makes you feel better, a relative of mine used to do fanfiction and would switch between past tense, present tense, first person, and third person all in the same paragraph. And at least you're going back and fixing it.

For me, it's probably casual movement, like shrugging or leaning back. I can only think of so many, and after a while it starts to feel repetitive, I've been trying to think of more, but it's tough to think of ones people would actually do.

Anyone but you.

This, but I remember someone wrote a full Manga about zombie idols. Zombieland saga, dumbest premise I ever heard. Hearing that actually was successful enough to get animated inspired me to write, because if that could be successful, so could whatever I wrote.