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Thanks for sharing your thoughts guys. Hindsight is 50/50. Planning beforehand can still result in unwanted elements you only discover after you've gone and executed it. Tho, if you truly have no regrets after 10+ volumes of content, props to you. Also sweet spaghetti is tasty, and I've had all...

Asking this, cause the stories I enjoyed reading the most felt like knew exactly what they were, and didn't try to be anything else for the sake of a cool twist. Follow-up: How and why did you come to this realization?

The Waffle House has found it's new host.

http://rsdb.org/races Take your pick

Naturally, this would probably involve transmigration/reincarnation etc. since the MC would have to know they're being forced by the plot towards a certain direction in the first place. To make a comparison, think of what I'm looking for as the "Your choices don't matter" aspect of Deltarune...

Because God (I) willed it. Jokes aside, why does physics exist? The system isn't there because of the world, the world is there because of the system.

The first few lines aren't much to go off of, its better to post the entire chapter. I can point out how it fucking sucks a couple problems though. The start has very little impact, these are things you're better off leaving a couple lines later. This is a first person perspective, try starting...

Let's ignore me reposting that 4chan copypasta... Allow this scripture to enlighten you.

Sounds like a you issue, buddy.

Welcome to the club. We offer headpats and cookies, but don't take them.(unless you want to end up in someone's basement pls help there's too many socks)

Any story, no more, no less.

Asking for my pet lizard.

Are you looking for a drug dealer? Oh boy I got a deal for you.

Simple, don't. Repeated use of the character's names might get annoying to read, so construct your sentences in a way that'll avoid pronouns. This does get difficult if they are a frequent character. To solve this, just try to use things aside from the name, ex: titles like "the potato farmer"...

Yep, you read that right, gimme WNs you'd rate a 1 or 2 star(or whatever the equivalent is in its platform). Also, please give a reason why you dislike it. Is it too cliche for you? Too edgy? Trying too hard to be "different"? Good buildup into a disappointment of a climax/ending? Or is it just...

Thanks for the responses, I made this cause they were both tags on the main site

"But it was all right, everything was all right, the struggle was finished. He had won the victory over himself. He loved Big Brother."

Personally, it would be... PRESENTATION! Now seriously, it's how they conduct themselves in pursuit of a goal. Ex: we have a potato farmer in search of the perfect potato. If one of his steps were to kill his son, then the antihero potato farmer would deliberate and may even choose to not go...

That could work, but the "slow-acting poison" doesn't need be slow, quite the contrary. Normal poison takes a few days so that would give our time looper enough time to counter act their poison and unravel the plot. What would be nice is to poison yourself beforehand with a relatively...

(ಠ_ಠ). Both of you are crushed by a giant potato Seduce me, then you can roll a d20. Then he loops back and is out for blood. Good plan, they can only set 1 at a time, power rule #2. You receive ?.