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I see. It may be how I read since I don't take a pause when reading a period. I will think about it and either add capitalize or change the whole dialogue format to have a comma instead of a period. You might be right there. I can still split a dialogue if I want to add a sighing in the middle...

There the Vrmmorpg setting with the regressor story, like "Rebirth of the Thief Who Roamed The World", "Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God" or "Rebirth of the Legendary Guardian"

Thanks for the feedback, Vampy Queen. I try to improve on the grammatical errors, but I'm still not perfect with it. For the "sigh" part, I see it used both ways, be it between asterisks or inside a dialogue, to place it in the right place. Still, in the dialogue you showed, I can use asterisks...

A boy runs inside a cave with his eyes sparkling with excitement at the idea of playing an explorer. Suddenly, a light appeared in his sight, running toward it. The boy saw a beautiful sword drive into the ground with half of its blade protruding. Running toward it, the boy didn't pay attention...

I... I think I can accept this one :blob_hmm_two:

Thanks for the feedback, little chicken. I am trying to improve my English, but I have to admit that I have some problems with tense. Some other errors occur often, like writing he/she/his/her instead of it/its due to the words having a gender in my native language.

I separate it with line when it happen in the same chapter, like using three ***

@RepresentingEnvy It's soon my turn :blobtaco:

Awakening: Except for beasts who born naturaly awakened, each races have a chance to have a space formed inside their bodies called spiritual world. Inside this spiritual world there a crystal seed who can be awakened when reaching adulthood which are 18 for humans. The crystal seeds, once...

It depend the christian denomination since there a few and each have their own interpretation of the journey of a soul and hell. In some, when dying, the soul go either to heaven or hell depending on how you lived on earth, in hell satan are the ruler and are often depicted to war against god...

Why so? People sacrificing their soul to satan to save someone happened, just cause the chance to satan moving for a soul are higher than god moving to a prayer. Starting with that, someone going to hell to save this soul can happen.

dante alighieri inferno ? There are. Maybe going there to save a soul?

You should try to do like the best blob out there and let people vote with like instead of selecting only by your taste if you want a fair competition.

Well, having opinions are always welcome. But if there too much for you to eat, you can skip mine. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/815788/crystal-evolution/

Writing jade skin mean their skin is pale, soft and glossy. The Jade is considered a symbol of purity, elegance, and preciousness in Chinese culture. It is believed to possess qualities such as grace, resilience, and spiritual purity.