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  1. RepresentingPride

    what's ur favorite scene that you've written so far? :)

    Hum :blob_hmm_two: Maybe Chapter 95 "Collapse", when a family die! Or maybe Chapter 87 "Earth Butterflies" when a little girl die! Ps: Yes, I don't want to meet my MC... Never...
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    ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ

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    W_w

    W_w
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    Asking for feedback good or bad?

    You can also look into the forum. Some have created feedback threads. If they are still taking stories, you can link yours here. You had to wait a few days, maybe a week or more, but you will have a reply.
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    How to explain a complex power system.

    :sweating_profusely: Don't take my story as a reference, it's horrible. And I did some info dump, in the beginning, to explain the power system, although it's not the cultivation levels, still...
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    How to explain a complex power system.

    I did something in that way for my story. You can come across any level of cultivator anywhere, but the amount of information shared with the "normal" citizen is restricted. The school teaches their student the first levels of cultivation but doesn't give any information about those above. Only...
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    How to explain a complex power system.

    Read some Xianxia/Wuxia for reference, you will see that what @SailusGebel said was used almost every time to not infodumb those type of information. You start in a small village/sect and grow little by little, at the beginning not everyone know what are upside this realm or that one etc. The...
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    Help me choose, Vrmmorpg or LitRpg?

    That not really true, and you might blind yourself if you think so. I won't said that every story of those genre have a good worldbuilding, but saying that none of them have it is wrong. I've already written a story, and from other comments, some may think I haven't written anything before. I...
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    Guys name a few epic speeches

    A few come to my mind, but I like the ones Lin Ming said in Martial World. And here one from Yun Che (Against the gods):
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    Story Length

    I prefer reading a story with at least 100 chapters. I don't like short story.
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    Help me choose, Vrmmorpg or LitRpg?

    It depend, if it's right at the beginning or not. If it's later, and that happen a lot in Vrmmorpg story, then is still count as Vrmmorpg. If it's from the beginning, then it can count as world travel story, or Isekai.
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    Help me choose, Vrmmorpg or LitRpg?

    One is inside a game, while the other is in reality.
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    Written into a corner.

    Or just have your MC leave the school and doing something else. He can travel the world or anything. You can also have him leave for an amount of time and when he come back the school are under attack, he save the school and the "badguy" ask for his comeback.
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    Depending the context you can also use: Amnesties, Condonations, Clemencies

    Depending the context you can also use: Amnesties, Condonations, Clemencies
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    Absolution?

    Absolution?
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    Black Myth Wukong is fun

    I did. It's fun.
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    Recommendations Harem with Yuri on it

    The world of Otome games is tough for mobs
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