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You can try "Martial World" or "Blue Phoenix", they are detailed on the techniques part.

It's well written, but I won't read it as it is. I didn't find it appealing and wasn't attracted by the beginning of your story. The plot can be interesting depending on what you want to do with it, but it can also go the route of an OP MC, strong/the strongest right from the start with what...

I know, I'm not talking about realistic fight with a boomerang, but in a fantasy setting, in which, every type of weapon/object can work. Here fantasy boomerang + capacity to manipulate it:

the 4 tons coffin took me off guard

It's a "Jujutsu Kaisen" ref, while it's not Jujutsu Kaisen who created domain expansion.

We're talking about fictions weapons, not what you use in real life.

Just go with a twin blade for the win!! If it's a fantasy story, there is no need to talk about carrying a weapon or drawing it cause it can be easy with any spatial object to carry and draw them as easily as a sword. Again, in fantasy, a lot can be added to Axes and Maces to defend and be...

Yes, spears and scythes become overused these last few years. While axe or mace are rarely used or never used, I didn't read any with it, but for me, they have fewer techniques that can be done with them, but maybe it's just my thoughts about them that are biased, and I just didn't read one that...

If you don't mind paying a bit, I really suggest Nijijourney AI. You can select an area, here for exemple the cheeks, and prompt what you want in that area only without changing the rest of it. Yes, human artwork will always be better, but AI can allow people without much money to get some...

I don't know about it, I mostly use Nijijourney. I don't use my computer to make ai image, I don't have a good one to do this. Still if you will use the illustration, cut the part with her hands, or try to get a good one with the right finger.

Does gyaru hair work? :blob_hmm_two:

What did you use to make it? If you will use it, try to re-generate it to correct the fingers, or depending of what you use, try to re-generate only the fingers area. Did you call it real artwork cause they are made by a human? Or because of the quality? I won't call this real artwork if it's...

If I read a story about romance with litrpg and sci-fi, I would like to read about the exploration of different planets, not staying in a "village." The age gap can make a lot run away from your story. Also, it seem weird for me that a man who near 20 000 years old will fall in love with a 22...

I can only think of hunter x hunter, but it's not the MC who did it. Maybe the manga "Auto Hunting", but it's not puppetry. Instead, the MC have an auto mode ability that control his body in the most efficient way.

Why do you want to add a dark tone? Is there a reason for it? Character growth? Vengeance arc? Or just to have your story feel more "mature"?

One who makes a lot of mistakes but learns from them. One who didn't care about consequences when it came to something dear to him, even if that meant becoming enemies of the entire world. Not a douchebag! Not full of himself, but know how to show off if someone triggers him.