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Well, my opinion might be in the minority. Did I enjoy it? Why not?! I enjoy documentaries. Documentary fiction might be more unique and imaginative... I can imagine eccentric cultural diversity, exotic creatures, and breathtaking topography. But, of course, this is just my personal opinion.

The concept of this story feels grand and epic, as if I were imagining the history of Middle Earth. However, as a reader, I'm not sure if this story will appeal to causal readers because generally without a point of entry from characters that the readers can relate to, grand and epic narratives...

Because your honesty makes me rub my stomach... :blob_aww:

Pandora's Box by Eldoria Pandora's Box... Don't open it! The box was opened, And they regretted it. Don't eat it! The apple was eaten, And they fell. Don't look back! She looked back, Left behind, And perished. Don't cut it down! The forest became settlement, The flood struck, And drowned...

Well, have a nice day.

Well, I'll give you some feedback to make your chapter 'easy to read' on mobile (readtable and mobile friendly): (1) Make short paragraphs of 1-3 sentences. (2) Separate dialogue between characters to keep the reader's focus. (3) Give a character tag to indicate who is speaking. Even if you...

Marry wrapped her arms around her daughter from behind and rested her chin atop the small head. “Mommy?!” “Mama loves Caelan.” “Caelan loves Mommy too, hehe…” Caelan felt her hair grow wet. “Mommy… Caelan’s hair is wet.” “Sometimes rain falls inside the house, honey. Mama will hug Caelan.”...

And the harsh reality is... oftentimes, complex and humane (3D) characters are less popular than flat and absurd (2D) characters who lack personality and are free to be filled with emotions by the readers. Even so, complex and humane characters always have better literary value.

Finally... after days of burnout... the epilogue of volume 2 is finally finished. It's a bittersweet ending, with no winners, only wounds. However, at least there's still a small hope amidst the darkness. The epilogue is titled Vol 2 Chapter 94: "Between Mist, Conscience, and Roses – Three...

Well, my advice only applies if you care about your readers. If you want to write an epic narrative, that's your artistic decision. However, if you're considering who will be reading your fiction, then providing personal stakes is a common recipe for engaging readers emotionally.

Well, both can be compelling narratives. However, it's best not to make magical or political conspiracies the core of the conflict, especially if your fiction is character-driven. Some readers may be allergic to the word "political." If you want to narrate a political conflict, it's best to do...

Inconsistent Character Descriptions Authors are also human and can forget. It's possible the author misread a character's description. For example, in chapter 10, side character X is described as having blonde hair. In chapter 100, the same character is described as having black hair. Well...