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Show it, don't tell it is a simple writing principle, but it's complicated in practice. If the narrative is too showy, the pacing may slow. If the narrative is too telling, the reader's emotions can become cold or even numb.

No (human-made) narrative is perfect from the start. If you miss an idea, you can save it for later chapters. However, if the idea doesn't change the substantial value of the finished chapter, but only adds detail to the narrative, you can revise the chapter (and rewrite it) at any time.

Well, this is my feedback as a casual reader who only reads it once without repeating it. Overall, your chapter is more telling than showing. Is that distracting? It depends on your goal in narrating this chapter. If you want the reader to experience the emotions alongside the protagonist, then...

Well, I will fight you with Ultra Instinct Goku for absolute defense mode activated super saiyan level 999

I just realized... reactions can run out. To anyone who has replied to my message and I haven't had a chance to respond, I'm sorry. I'm out of reactions.

I appreciate your honest feedback, especially when assessing my prologue. Thank you.

Hmm... that's a tricky question. I haven't killed off any significant characters, so I'm not qualified to answer this question. However, I think we can learn from some important characters in mainstream fiction. I think foreshadowing should be present, even if it's implicit. Like cliched...

Honestly... this is very sad. We live in an era where noise is 24/7 through TV, social media, and the internet. I often see children already saying bad words because they have been fed with vulgar content since childhood. I can understand why their parents gave them their cell phones (because...

Don't worry... Eldoria values story content more than grammar or the use of AI as an assistant. A good story is one that has an ending... there are many stories out there that don't end (due to abandonment or other factors).

I always remember you as a humble man, dude.