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First, I'm not saying you should write constantly. Burnout, fatigue, and writer's block are real. You can rest when you're tired. You can write when you're in the mood. You can complain when you're not getting enough readers. That's humane. But the most important thing is your writing goal. If...

Thank you for your feedback. :blob_salute: The first point in your complaint is indeed my writing style. Onomatopoeia often appears in manga and LN with italic, but I enclose them in double quotation marks ("...") because I truly treat them as authentic sounds that readers can perceive. On the...

Feedback for Handling Sensitive Content Well, I make a feedback request for chapters with dark, sensitive, heavy and emotional content. I'm not sure if I've handled these kinds of chapters wisely considering my series is starting to reach an emotional climax. Here's one of the darkest...

Love, loss and regret are emotional fictional themes.

Thank you for the constructive feedback. Now I can improve my narrative. :blob_melt: :blob_aww:

I'm just quoting Jean Piaget's cognitive development theory. If you disagree, please conduct comparative research to deconstruct this theory. But that's certainly beyond the scope of this feedback discussion.

It's just an example, dude.

Yes, you need to set limits in the form of cost, cooldown, and even backslash if skill is overused. It helps make your characters more humane and maintain the tension of the story. If every monster dies with a single slash without a cost, the tension will feel flat, and readers might get...

What?! I don't see Satella the envy witch

I respect your opinion. But please understand the psychology of preoperational children (2-7 years old) according to Jean Piaget's cognitive development theory. At their ages, children tend to be imaginative (thinking objects have souls - animism), egocentric (thinking the world is centered...

Why not?

Honestly just reading this answer.. I feel uncomfortable.

I'll give my perspective as a reader... some readers may find it uncomfortable or even traumatizing. There are many ways to narrate the tragic setting of children without resorting to SA. In the real world, even criminals have a code of ethics. Some criminals won't touch children. And others...

Then why do you ask this question... if you stick to your artistic vision then don't listen to readers' opinions.

Honestly, some readers might feel uncomfortable if you give SA background for children.

Thank you for your feedback. :blob_salute:

Honestly, as an action chapter, this chapter is quite good. But as a horror chapter, it didn't give me (reader) goosebumps. I identified the problem as a lack of tension in this chapter because the narrative focuses more on the protagonist's inner state than living atmosphere. A good horror...

After reading your comprehensive feedback, I can say your answer is... Thank you for this excellent feedback. It gives me the confidence to write this narrative further. :blob_aww: Your answer is close to correct. Actually, my main difficulty in writing this POV is the limitation of prose...

This is nobledark, or rather, grim's fairy tale. A dark fantasy seen from a child's perspective.

Her actual age is a secret. But the age range you provided is correct.