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  1. Kotohood

    Asking for tips on how to write sound effects

    *Mooch *Moans *Slurp *Smack "Ohh yeah" X moans in pleasure. "Aaahhhh. Ahhhhhhh!!!!!!" Y climaxed in ecstasy. *Slurp *Smooch "Umm" x and y tongues, rolled and coiled over one another. They sounds of lust could be heard across the room *Smack. "Ahhn!" X slams Y in like a beast. Smacking sounds...
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    MAGIc

    In my opinion. I can see one might need a talent to create a new magic/spell but I do not understand the meed for them to specifically have a skill in order to do that. Take real life for example. When one needs a spoon, you can either 1) buy it(Like buying a magic book/scroll and learning it)...
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    The Yuri Writing Help Room (18+)

    Isn't that basically Shoujo-Ai? I mean for Yuri it has to be romantically involved doesn't it? Don't take my word for it though. It's just my two cents.
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    The Yuri Garden Writing Competition (2019) (Now voting)

    No it's ok. I got an idea in my mind already. You might want to post examples anyways for others that might be interested. I'm sure they will need all the help they can get.:blob_evil_two:
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    The Yuri Garden Writing Competition (2019) (Now voting)

    Yuri in 1500-2500 words hmmm. That's going to be a challenge.
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    Something I noticed

    Really now? Cause most of it that I see is Yuri and Isekai and gender bender lol.
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    characters

    Do whatever you like man. It's not about the powers. It's how they use the power!
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    Tags in a Novel

    It might work. I'm not really an expert in this, but it will help against those who just tag whatever tags they like I guess. But I can imagine it being too cluttery if not implemented well.
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    Tags in a Novel

    My problem stems more from the fact that I do not understand some of tags. Like I don't have a dictionary to explain what tag is what. Like some tags are just vague and some tags just doesn't fit if you get what I mean. Sometimes, the tag I'm looking for would not be in the list and I would...
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    Writing Prompt The thoughts and opinions of an ancient tree

    I don't really have a story written up for this. But I once had an idea to write a story regarding a tree. She would be like the oldest most badass tree out there and her roots span across multiple kingdoms. She would have like child trees/elves that grew from her branches and they are...
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    Tips in writing a story

    All I can give you is three main tips that I've faced during these past few weeks writting up chapters. 1) Plan out everything you can. Characters, traits, plot, premise, direction, and your style. 2) Find your own voice, write what you want to write not what others want to read. Take...
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    Editing Any tips on how to find wrong tenses?

    The question as per title. Are there any tips to finding the wrong tenses during editing? My way so far is to read through a chapter twice and rewriting any grammar and tense errors and to rewrite words to make it sound better. Then my friend told me to use the Ctrl +F/R Method. He told me to...
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    Tags, ain't they spoiler-ish?

    Depends on the tags I guess. There are times where people tags things that don't happen until the end or very rarely happens in the story. I can't help but to feel cheated by those tags. But if a tag has something to do with a core of a story then it's probably fine. Because the tag will...
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    Mary Sue, objective cardinal signs.

    Just to add my two cents. Mary Sue/Gary Stu as a concept is not something that is bad, but rather the execution of it. If you want this guy to be perfect that's fine, but the moment this guy stops feeling 'real' and starts to feel like some sort of distant god that just bend the rules of the...
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    Close Combat Feedback

    Alright, I breezed through and these are the few points I got across. 1)Story is in past tense yet the events are as if it is happening in real time. It kinda brings me out of the immersion as I'm no longer in the place but looking at it like it's some sort of memory now. 2) Standard opening...
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    Comment/feedback

    I give it a 1/26. You didn't even try to make a coherent story. And there is 25 more interesting character you could have expanded on but you only focus on one. Such a disappointment. It's not even the best character.
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    How many buffer chapters do you keep?

    I think we all can relate. :blob_teary:
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    How many buffer chapters do you keep?

    Question as per tittle, how many buffer chapters do you all have in case for rainy days or do you just write, edit and publish on the spot?
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    Zoom In on Book Cover

    Agree +3
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    What genres are you used to writing?

    My hardest genres are usually historical fiction and Mystery. It's hard to write a story based in history if you don't know the history and the causation of it that well and Mystery is hard for me, because you have to show the audience enough, but not enough to ruin the suspense, it's not...
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